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白水
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Posted: 2006-11-11 08:42:31 Post subject: 七绝<致友人>

七绝<致友人> 弄斧班门伐旭日寒鸥泣泪润新词风严雨冷凝秋水啼血子规断旧枝

白水
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Posted: 2006-11-11 08:43:08 Post subject:

七绝<和友人> 断羽舒毫泪作诗寒窗冷景和秋词枕书夜梦然笛曲回首再唱绿柳枝附枕书然笛[满溪香]原玉: 跟姐姐学一首，嘻嘻`` 可问寒鸥多少泪，空灵一撒碧云词。冰弦斜指佳人梦，句句只为芳草枝。

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-01-14 11:17:00 Post subject:

相比觉得和诗写得流畅自然些。意境也好。欣赏。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-01-14 21:05:56 Post subject:

暗香如沁 wrote:

相比觉得和诗写得流畅自然些。意境也好。欣赏。

知道为什么吗? 然笛MM的诗歌总是那么有灵气, 让人不由的就会被勾出点灵感来, 最近她也不知忙什么, 不见人了, 竹子也忙, 搞的我也没心情写这些格啊律的了. 真得谢谢你今天给了我点写作冲动. 不知往后会怎样, 或许再写不出来东西了. 也罢, 你们写, 我读.

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Posted: 2007-01-15 02:14:00 Post subject:

天，这么谦虚！这是非常不礼貌的行为。哈。大家都写。我来读。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-01-15 06:17:12 Post subject:

暗香如沁 wrote:

天，这么谦虚！这是非常不礼貌的行为。哈。
大家都写。我来读。 Very Happy

最不礼貌的是这位, 不辞而别 Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-01-15 14:08:17 Post subject:

对啊。这小丫头去哪了。很想她的聪明灵气。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

白水
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Posted: 2007-01-17 07:22:46 Post subject:

暗香如沁 wrote:

对啊。这小丫头去哪了。很想她的聪明灵气。

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Posted: 2007-01-17 08:59:31 Post subject:

提上去。说不定哪天这丫头回来就看见了。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

白水
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Posted: 2007-01-18 04:44:46 Post subject:

暗香如沁 wrote:

提上去。说不定哪天这丫头回来就看见了。 Smile

这小丫头准是和李白对酒去了,还醉着呢 Wink

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Posted: 2007-01-18 22:55:06 Post subject: Re: 七绝<致友人>

白水 Moonlight wrote:

七绝<致友人>
弄斧班门伐旭日寒鸥泣泪润新词
风严雨冷凝秋水啼血子规断旧枝

白水君,我来凑热闹,临屏步韵,不好莫怪:

腊梅吟轻酷霜泪，偏与冰雪较新词。
岁月添古梦不老，炼赋惹得鹊踏枝。
_________________
空钩久垂
钓得
烟波月醉

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Posted: 2007-01-19 02:17:05 Post subject:

欣赏一下。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

白水
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Posted: 2007-01-23 05:26:52 Post subject: Re: 七绝<致友人>

又一方天 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

七绝<致友人>
弄斧班门伐旭日寒鸥泣泪润新词
风严雨冷凝秋水啼血子规断旧枝

白水君,我来凑热闹,临屏步韵,不好莫怪:

腊梅吟轻酷霜泪，偏与冰雪较新词。
岁月添古梦不老，炼赋惹得鹊踏枝。

七绝<答谢又一方天>

又读文友和新诗
一曲清歌忆旧词
方醒丝竹幽梦浅
天涯无路怎折枝

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Posted: 2007-01-24 10:42:52 Post subject:

美啊。帅哥才子。我崇拜死你了 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

白水
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Posted: 2007-01-24 19:49:59 Post subject:

暗香如沁 wrote:

美啊。帅哥才子。我崇拜死你了

MM, 你这么一叫我真晕了 Wink

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Posted: 2007-01-30 16:25:58 Post subject:

呵呵，我也帮着提一下。

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Posted: 2007-01-31 22:04:49 Post subject:

俺再来欣赏。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-01-31 22:39:21 Post subject:

白水的大气联想丰富，化用典故自然，不过有时稍显刻意。枕书的诗歌一向轻灵，显得随意自然。性格不同，风格不同。一个厚重有力，一个飘逸轻巧。都是令人喜欢的美眉。 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2007-02-01 00:17:46 Post subject:

再和白水(嵌名) 白云笺舒醉和诗水荡曲新狂赋词灵光织就虹七彩巧剪新裁杨柳枝附白水原作又读文友和新诗一曲清歌忆旧词方醒丝竹幽梦浅天涯无路怎折枝 _________________ 空钩久垂钓得烟波月醉

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Posted: 2007-02-01 03:44:19 Post subject:

来欣赏。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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