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孤鸟
曲元奇
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PostPosted: 2008-04-15 21:04:19    Post subject: 孤鸟 Reply with quote
一只孤鸟
飞过

黑色的翅膀拍打着黄昏
黄昏里
站着
我

它飞出我的眼光
落进
我的心
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2008-04-16 05:25:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
窝
我的心
落进
黑色的翅膀拍打着黄昏

我
站在
黄昏里
它飞出我的眼光

飞过
一只孤鸟
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PostPosted: 2008-04-16 16:54:32    Post subject: Reply with quote
孤独也不错噢，有时候很喜欢那种感觉。
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悠子
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PostPosted: 2008-04-16 19:06:15    Post subject: 窝 心:P Reply with quote
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
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PostPosted: 2008-04-16 21:41:45    Post subject: 窩心哪～ Reply with quote
悠子 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
窝
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曲元奇
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PostPosted: 2008-04-16 21:42:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
经过诗盗兄一翻别有一翻风味 有时喜欢孤独在孤独里寻找美感这是不是苏妹的意思
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PostPosted: 2008-04-17 12:35:39    Post subject: Reply with quote
啥鸟呀~~漂亮一点儿就好了~~
还不至于太冷
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PostPosted: 2008-04-18 21:43:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
它飞出我的眼光
落进
我的心
窝
心中有月也很美好!
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PostPosted: 2008-04-19 19:16:33    Post subject: Reply with quote
黄昏中的孤鸟与黄昏中的人孤鸟落进孤人的心窝 诗道兄翻新更上一曾楼
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