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（读领风骚-独语者）说吧

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-04-08 01:24:50 Post subject: （读领风骚-独语者）说吧

说吧有几回，在关暗的房间里每一次呼吸都吞吐寂寞有几回，在寂寞的空气中每一个影像都是墨色打从心底晕染开来，谜样的纤维晕染迷惑在眉间锁住，周身似浆烫过一般空气因潮湿而凝结，夜晚因此提早脚步这正是一种需要，我的回忆里的一个夜景，身旁有你没你已不再重要面对的是现在的我，知道这一天的到来关暗的房间、寂寞的空气、潮湿的夜晚我将站上那心里的一个夜的景点站在那里等待，或许加入一些思考明白，有一天的到来 2008/4/8那天1220 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-04-08 06:23:29 Post subject:

想说，好像还是没有说出来

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Posted: 2008-04-08 09:06:40 Post subject:

我知道，我知道，有一天的到来 :就是，我们都要面对的时刻，死亡。哈哈。我也接一首。我也接一首去。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-04-08 09:07:02 Post subject: 哪有？全都坦坦白白。每一个今天都知道每一个明天会到来。

悠子 wrote:

想说，好像还是没有说出来

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Posted: 2008-04-08 09:09:14 Post subject: 跳太远了！能把每一个明天都想过一遍，就算厉害了。

苏茉儿 wrote:

我知道，我知道，有一天的到来 :就是，我们都要面对的时刻，死亡。哈哈。我也接一首。我也接一首去。

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Posted: 2008-04-08 09:23:14 Post subject:

我发现，我发现，您这太短了。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-04-08 09:42:12 Post subject: 就说么，你以众击寡！俺成了寡人～

苏茉儿 wrote:

我发现，我发现，您这太短了。

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Posted: 2008-04-08 16:53:29 Post subject:

回忆的分子，在今夜漫漫地飘散 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-04-08 17:22:34 Post subject: 有缘兄这一句比我那一整首都好！

是有缘 wrote:

回忆的分子，在今夜漫漫地飘散

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Posted: 2008-04-09 08:22:04 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

是有缘 wrote:

回忆的分子，在今夜漫漫地飘散

哈哈，服不服。
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詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-04-09 11:39:50 Post subject: 福！

发福～ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-04-10 14:31:17 Post subject:

细腻！

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-04-10 14:50:14 Post subject: 好久没来啦！

荷梦 wrote:

细腻！

老师选一篇您的文，我们就文内容做练习。OK～
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