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站在山顶上

溪语
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Posted: 2008-04-10 07:07:09 Post subject: 站在山顶上

站得高看得远是在山顶的一种感受站得高摔得重是在山顶的又一种感受登上一座山不容易在山顶保持湖泊的心境更不容易如果四周不是山就有看得远的高高在上如果无视脚下的山就有很惨的堕落站在山顶上主宰你心情的依旧是山把一座山踩在脚下你得承受另一座山的份量 _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-04-10 13:53:50 Post subject:

哲理诗，在诗性与哲理间很难把握好尺度。。。

溪语
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Posted: 2008-04-18 04:20:28 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

哲理诗，在诗性与哲理间很难把握好尺度。。。

对了.自我觉得诗性少了,说教多了.但看了看也就不改了!
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山城子
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Posted: 2008-04-18 06:18:34 Post subject:

把一座山踩在脚下你得承受另一座山的份量 ——应是多座呀！问好！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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