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男人／女人

雪硯
童生

Joined: 30 Apr 2007
Posts: 80
Location: 台灣‧苗栗
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Posted: 2008-04-09 21:30:43 Post subject: 男人／女人

男人／女人一只风筝踹了他一脚扭头远去整个世界在女人的身上，流浪整个世界在露珠的背后习惯了一个很不情愿的早上她走向电话把清晨的鸟鸣全挂在去年的一棵树下那个瘤，从来也没说要走就只剩这事；那个瘤监视着，他的不快乐月亮爬进他的眼终于在他体内的一座花园发现，一群肢体不全的女人嘘！他花了半个世纪掩埋她们的影子身上，全是鸽粪 _________________ 大寂蜉蝣 http://blog.sina.com.tw/guogin100/

博弈
榜眼

Joined: 21 Dec 2006
Posts: 4381
Location: SFO
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Posted: 2008-04-10 10:17:38 Post subject:

以 projective verse 诗法来看 (CHARLES OLSON) 是很好的一首诗。在中文里采用类似的开放性诗句，别有意思。 ”月亮爬进他的眼终于在他体内的一座花园发现，一群肢体不全的女人“ 爬进灵魂之窗。。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

荷梦
进士出身

Joined: 19 Dec 2006
Posts: 2826
Location: 湖北，黄梅
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Posted: 2008-04-10 13:59:00 Post subject:

她走向电话把清晨的鸟鸣全挂在去年的一棵树下 ——喜欢~！

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