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来自山里的人(五首),请拍!
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PostPosted: 2008-04-07 03:48:18    Post subject: 来自山里的人(五首),请拍! Reply with quote

《来自山里的人》

去年的秋风
绕过城市的边缘离开了,再也没有回来
山里人,嘴里含着泥土的气味
如山里小溪,耐不住性子汇入大潮人流,守一方土地
寒风渐起时刻,奔跑是他们最好的抵御方式

围绕许多旧故事,他们选择用身心疲倦来忘记
体格并不雄健,但他们可以大碗喝酒
也可以小杯品味。说粗话,偶尔也蹦出几句流行歌曲
忙忙碌碌过日子。宁愿在城市怀里迷醉
也不愿孤独

《村头风水林》

遮住了流水
遮住了左右稻田,遮住了头顶上还没被污染的
时常蔚蓝的天空
繁茂地生长了上百年,无人敢动刀斧
不敢大声喧哗

遮不住林边社庙里旺盛的香烛,袅袅的烟雾
遮不住弯曲的脊背,沉重的头颅,虔诚的目光
一条小路从这边穿过去
在那头冒出来,常年不长草
很光滑

《抓不住》

我离开了
穿过洒满阳光的站前广场
三轮车夫在招揽生意,我不是他的顾客
不见风起。地面洁净,看不到匆忙而凌乱的脚印
候车室里挤满准备去远方的人,接近窒息
汽笛响起,空旷的站台,你孤单的身影渐渐远去
我挥动的手,张开
再收拢,除了即将来临的黄昏
抓不住什么

《深秋的阳光》

星期天,我在屋内
看到一片阳光,照在不远处高楼的外墙上
它出现最恰当的时候
亮亮的阳光,正好在深秋时节,照着面积很大的高墙
居住在那高楼里的人一定很温暖,很幸福
如果是书,我想一页页翻开,读着一个又一个明亮的
名字,一户又一户和睦的家
如果是草地,我想躺着
像一只懒猫

《安心》

从这条路一直走下去
我态度端正,无大欲,不大喜也不大悲
人群熙熙攘攘,声音巨大,有人群殴,有人赌博
充满强悍和智慧,也少不了血腥

我没有远大理想
走得不紧不慢,对正在盛开的菊花,熟视无睹
从十月到明年春天,如果顺利,没有车祸发生
走过凌乱的路面,我侧身可以看到夕阳下
大桥在河面的倒影
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PostPosted: 2008-04-09 03:50:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗给抱上去 问好你
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PostPosted: 2008-04-09 06:36:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

遮不住林边社庙里旺盛的香烛,袅袅的烟雾
遮不住弯曲的脊背,沉重的头颅,虔诚的目光
一条小路从这边穿过去
在那头冒出来,常年不长草
很光滑


细致的叙述,深刻的内涵~问好阿秀!
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PostPosted: 2008-04-09 15:41:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢第一首的表达方式!!!当然其余的也不错!!!!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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