雪硯
童生
Joined: 30 Apr 2007
Posts: 80
Location: 台灣‧苗栗
雪硯Collection |
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春的谐趣 ／雪砚
他说，是法螺
声音盘上山巅
她怀里的孩子，眼睛清亮
鹰斜着翅膀探头
天色，从脚踝上升
是的，云该如此缄默
低垂的谷米
如此谦卑
雨水轻缓滑过你的肚脐
一支醉人的琵琶，延溪躺卧
柴扉半掩
饭香，催人下马
经翻招摇处，溅起几片春衫
我要睡了
墙上的影子，醒了
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大寂蜉蝣
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半溪明月
榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
| Posted: 2008-04-06 16:14:10 Post subject: |
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经幡招摇处~
有种气势~欣赏! |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection |
| Posted: 2008-04-06 19:21:24 Post subject: |
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我要睡了
墙上的影子，醒了
喜欢这两句, 回味无穷 |
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雪硯
童生
Joined: 30 Apr 2007
Posts: 80
Location: 台灣‧苗栗
雪硯Collection |
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雪硯
童生
Joined: 30 Apr 2007
Posts: 80
Location: 台灣‧苗栗
雪硯Collection |
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博弈
榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006
Posts: 4381
Location: SFO
博弈Collection |
| Posted: 2008-04-08 08:40:06 Post subject: |
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一支醉人的琵琶，延溪躺卧
具形象，音象，意象之神韵。
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（在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美） |
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荷梦
进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006
Posts: 2826
Location: 湖北，黄梅
荷梦Collection |
| Posted: 2008-04-09 01:11:53 Post subject: |
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我要睡了
墙上的影子，醒了
喜欢这两句, 回味无穷 |
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