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昨天下雨了

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Posted: 2008-04-03 09:18:08 Post subject: 昨天下雨了

昨天下雨了，下雨了昨天没下雨，没下雨昨天下雨了，雨下了昨天没下雨，没雨下昨天下雨了，下雨了昨天下雨了，傍晚下雨了今天没雨是今天了今天不雨不是昨天回到下雨是昨天乎回到有雨的昨天傍晚 _________________ 这有点麻烦

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Posted: 2008-04-03 11:10:49 Post subject:

道是有雨却无雨？

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Posted: 2008-04-03 11:26:01 Post subject:

还有哪，今天是今天了 _________________ 这有点麻烦

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Posted: 2008-04-03 11:44:34 Post subject:

今天不是昨天，言之有理

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Posted: 2008-04-03 11:47:25 Post subject:

你这雨字，再排列好一点，这诗就下雨了

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Posted: 2008-04-03 12:13:13 Post subject:

重排，道是无花却有花 _________________ 这有点麻烦

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Posted: 2008-04-05 00:40:33 Post subject:

昨天下雨了，下雨了昨天没雨下，没雨下昨天下雨了，下雨了昨天没雨下，没雨下昨天下雨了，下雨了昨天下雨了，下雨了，傍晚今天没雨是今天了今天不雨不是昨天回到下雨是昨天回到有雨的昨天傍这晚排好的雨，下着，下着 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-04-05 07:47:12 Post subject:

我昨天想了半天，怎么排更漂亮，没想出来。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-04-06 03:51:09 Post subject: 局部有雨~

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

昨天下雨了，下雨了
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Posted: 2008-04-06 10:40:41 Post subject:

雨~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-04-06 11:27:37 Post subject:

TORONTO昨天天晴了

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