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庄之谐
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PostPosted: 2008-04-05 09:01:45    Post subject: [原创]丰收的定义 Reply with quote

晚归的鸟呼儿唤女
唐诗滑下了牛背
行吟的僧人走走停停
口中念念有词
紫金钵挂在了天上


庄稼黑压压地倒下一大片
丰收自觉地走进农家的院落
最美丽的诗句就要临盆
赶快来杯酒吧,句子已破碎
星星滴下的汗水,被黑夜吞噬


看家狗和汽笛一起欢叫
农夫的锄头站着睡觉
梦里乾坤,一头牛和一个上帝
动一动手里的缰绳
能牵走一艘船,毫不费力


农家的音乐是篝火的掌声
祖先躲在一边,不停地打扮
假如地上有个洞
所有的快乐都会钻出来
看那件才制的新衣


咱们一起做个有钱人
至少在今天
笑容爬上了眉梢和树梢
看村头老爹家的独子
羞答答地做个新郎
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PostPosted: 2008-04-05 15:19:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

很生动活泼

最美丽的诗句就要临盆
赶快来杯酒吧,句子已破碎
星星滴下的汗水,被黑夜吞噬

问好并欢迎庄之谐
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PostPosted: 2008-04-05 16:17:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有韵律节奏感~问好欢迎庄之谐!
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PostPosted: 2008-04-05 16:51:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢hepingdao,谢谢半溪明月,问二位好!
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PostPosted: 2008-04-05 18:01:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

看村头老爹家的独子
羞答答地做个新郎


灵动 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-04-06 07:27:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白水,问候!
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