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《后庭花》

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白水
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Posted: 2008-04-04 16:11:31 Post subject: 《后庭花》

《后庭花》后庭无花无花的后庭就连几朵残存的雪也被雨水洗了去你，不再歌。歌声不再的你只听雨。清明的雨很冷，很沉沉的如同你湿漉漉的长发风吹不动。连狂风都吹不动的发是你不能飞扬的思绪沉沉地落下来，从九天而落一轮沉沉的月落入原本就属于你的大海

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Posted: 2008-04-04 19:26:25 Post subject:

后两节很好。诗人不会错过一个节气。都不用看日历了。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-04-04 21:25:38 Post subject:

欣赏姐姐的诗把一种感觉把握了所以有回味问候您 _________________ 莞君

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Posted: 2008-04-05 03:02:35 Post subject:

落下来，从九天而落一轮沉沉的月落入原本就属于你的大海清明雨纷纷～问好白水！

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Posted: 2008-04-05 15:17:03 Post subject:

雪花洗去梨花开思绪翩翩燕归来难得后庭花再起几度关山几度春我只会打油诗了 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2008-04-05 18:37:57 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

后两节很好。
诗人不会错过一个节气。都不用看日历了。

是啊, 我也是读了朋友们的诗歌, 才想起又是清明 Embarassed

白水
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Posted: 2008-04-05 18:38:58 Post subject:

莞君 wrote:

欣赏姐姐的诗把一种感觉把握了所以有回味问候您

问好DD. 谢谢理解

白水
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Posted: 2008-04-05 18:41:13 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

落下来，从九天而落
...

问好月亮. 清明多雨, 连TORONTO昨天也开始下雨了.

白水
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Posted: 2008-04-05 18:53:57 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

雪花洗去梨花开
思绪翩翩燕归来
难得后庭花再起
几度关山几度春

我只会打油诗了

...

谢谢PEACE, 那我就绝一首吧.

人皮唐卡缀乌纱, 口尾歪斜又几家!
可叹轻歌缭玉树, 深宫小曲唱梨花

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Posted: 2008-04-06 03:34:29 Post subject:

花开的时候不欢喜,落时也不伤悲. 这些情绪留给了赏花人. 问好朋友快乐! _________________ 通联:(065202)京东燕郊开发区高楼镇北京经济技术职业学院鹿向亮 http://blog.sina.com.cn/luxiangliang

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Posted: 2008-04-06 05:15:06 Post subject:

清明时节雨纷纷。。。

莞君
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Posted: 2008-04-06 05:47:14 Post subject:

再来品品远握问候 _________________ 莞君

白水
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Posted: 2008-04-06 09:22:04 Post subject:

鹿向亮 wrote:

花开的时候不欢喜,落时也不伤悲.
这些情绪留给了赏花人.
问好朋友快乐!

宠辱不惊，看庭前花开花落；去留无意，望天空云卷云舒。 Cool

白水
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Posted: 2008-04-06 09:22:46 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

清明时节雨纷纷。。。

是啊, 那天正好下雨......

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Posted: 2008-04-06 09:23:36 Post subject:

莞君 wrote:

再来品品远握问候

问好莞君.

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Posted: 2008-04-06 14:43:11 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

《后庭花》

后庭无花
无花的后庭
...

心生联想!!!!!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
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Posted: 2008-04-06 15:48:36 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

雪花洗去梨花开
...

几度关山几度春打油：几度关山几度白

梨花色白春天即开同时韵在三得也哉
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Posted: 2008-04-06 19:22:58 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

《后庭花》

后庭无花
无花的后庭
...

心生联想!!!!!

想什么呢

问好海军

白水
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Posted: 2008-04-06 19:23:41 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

雪花洗去梨花开
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几度关山几度春打油：几度关山几度白
...

改的真不错

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Posted: 2008-04-15 19:54:08 Post subject:

落下来，时从九天而落北美枫一轮沉沉的月落入原本就属于你的大海有一咱美 _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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