红袖添乱
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Joined: 09 Jan 2008
Posts: 778
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 Posted: 2008-04-03 11:04:43 Post subject: 春天不是写诗天 |
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这是一个想飞的日子
每一声鸟鸣
就给那朵小野花
一次跃跃欲飞的冲动
推开一扇门，
阳光突然向书桌投来
一把山顶放风筝的金缕线
门外，懵懂的山野
掉了一地黄色小扣子
慌张的不知道如何缝回淑女状
溪流温柔的叹息
竟有如此的穿透力
穿石而过，带走淅沥一整夜的
辗转反侧~~想入非非~~
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悠子
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Joined: 04 Jan 2008
Posts: 1383
Location: US
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| Posted: 2008-04-03 11:09:47 Post subject: |
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| 我看完就去 |
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是有缘
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Joined: 08 Feb 2008
Posts: 741
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| Posted: 2008-04-03 15:02:04 Post subject: |
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| 同一种心情，跟着去。 |
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苏茉儿
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Joined: 31 Dec 2007
Posts: 739
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| Posted: 2008-04-04 07:39:47 Post subject: |
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嘿嘿~~~过来喝杯茉莉花茶吧。免费滴。
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啥么
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Joined: 10 Jan 2008
Posts: 169
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| Posted: 2008-04-04 08:55:28 Post subject: |
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登山放风筝北美文学网去吧
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詩盜喜裸評
进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007
Posts: 2984
Location: 台湾，台北
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| Posted: 2008-04-05 00:42:59 Post subject: |
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找个人陪，再去。
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拈花微笑
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Joined: 21 Jan 2008
Posts: 311
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| Posted: 2008-04-05 08:09:58 Post subject: |
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春姑娘跃然纸上。。。赞！
最后一节似可有可无。。。：)
竞-->竟？ type error 
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