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五绝—清明

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-04-02 22:50:39 Post subject: 五绝—清明

细雨润幽窗，清明意感伤。天公留念意，洒泪悼凄凉。

是有缘
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Posted: 2008-04-03 15:10:55 Post subject:

喜欢后两句。第二句若是依然写景就更棒了。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-04-03 15:29:00 Post subject:

莹雪MM最近写得比较伤感凄婉。望多多保重！

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Posted: 2008-04-03 21:28:00 Post subject:

是有缘 wrote:

喜欢后两句。第二句若是依然写景就更棒了。

呵呵，谢谢关注！

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-04-03 21:31:41 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

莹雪MM最近写得比较伤感凄婉。望多多保重！

哦，是节气所感。不会有任何影响的，请qinghongGG宽怀吧！ Razz

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Posted: 2008-04-04 04:18:42 Post subject:

欣赏好律。问好。

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Posted: 2008-04-04 23:31:37 Post subject:

荆山云 wrote:

欣赏好律。问好。

谢谢关注！问好。

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Posted: 2008-04-05 13:53:50 Post subject:

借韵和一首细雨润四方，薄雾透清阳。祭奠怀先贤，踏青思路长。

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Posted: 2008-04-05 19:37:59 Post subject:

天公留念意，洒泪悼凄凉。欣赏了。 _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

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Posted: 2008-04-05 22:18:03 Post subject:

灯台小老鼠 wrote:

借韵和一首

细雨润四方，薄雾透清阳。
祭奠怀先贤，踏青思路长。

回和一首
风暖至轩窗，青茵醉艳阳。
彩鸢空戏乐，牵线路难长。

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-04-05 22:18:49 Post subject:

王君明 wrote:

天公留念意，洒泪悼凄凉。
欣赏了。

谢谢！

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