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清明雨

山城子
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Joined: 23 May 2007
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Posted: 2008-04-02 22:26:02 Post subject: 清明雨

清明雨文/ 山城子明日清明今日雨淅淅沥沥多少老年儿女泪滴透过万里迷蒙神思回到辽西爹妈的坟头谁来填土岁月孤寂走出来吧看看墓碑下蒲公英金黄色的思念一朵、一朵、一朵…… 时间不可回逆父亲蹲在地头戚戚目光抚摸着庄稼也抚摸着我幼小的年纪为什么匆匆而走扔下母亲几近半个世纪长杆烟袋无言地哼唱哼白了头发干涸了泪线暮色连着晨星不给心一点点缝隙…… 大喊一声大喊一声爹妈有什么用一切已经随历史枯去我问窗外的雨何以这般淅淅沥沥 2008-4-3 于黔中文化村

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2008-04-02 23:06:30 Post subject:

我问窗外的雨何以这般淅淅沥沥写的动情感人~问好老师!

杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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Location: 吉林
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Posted: 2008-04-03 13:30:22 Post subject:

清明时节,雨纷纷,路上行人,欲断魂. _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

nobody
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Joined: 31 Dec 2006
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Posted: 2008-04-03 23:24:05 Post subject:

见惯了山城子老师充满乐观情趣的诗风，来个悲切的，也真悲切。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

子花
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Joined: 08 Mar 2007
Posts: 722

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Posted: 2008-04-04 00:07:03 Post subject:

为什么匆匆而走扔下母亲几近半个世纪的长杆烟袋无言地哼唱哼白了头发干涸了泪线暮色连着晨星不给心一点点缝隙…… 好诗歌！！！学习老师

山城子
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Posted: 2008-04-04 05:11:32 Post subject: 问好明月！

半溪明月 wrote:

我问窗外的雨
何以这般淅淅沥沥

写的动情感人~问好老师!

问好明月！

山城子
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Joined: 23 May 2007
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Posted: 2008-04-04 05:13:36 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

清明时节,雨纷纷,路上行人,欲断魂.

问好海军！

山城子
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Posted: 2008-04-04 05:14:58 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

见惯了山城子老师充满乐观情趣的诗风，来个悲切的，也真悲切。

谢谢nobody朋友！

山城子
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Posted: 2008-04-04 05:16:38 Post subject:

子花 wrote:

为什么匆匆而走
...

问好子花！
互相学习！

钓月
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Joined: 12 Apr 2008
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Posted: 2008-04-16 15:51:30 Post subject:

哼白了头发干涸了泪线暮色连着晨星不给心一点点缝隙娓娓道来如泣如诉押韵! _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

山城子
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Posted: 2008-04-17 00:34:12 Post subject:

钓月 wrote:

哼白了头发
...

谢谢钓月！

莞君
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Joined: 20 Oct 2007
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Location: 中国陕西
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Posted: 2008-04-17 03:30:48 Post subject:

干净朴实的语言问好 _________________ 莞君

马彦
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Joined: 27 Mar 2008
Posts: 50
Location: 江苏
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Posted: 2008-04-17 04:54:06 Post subject:

来了，我看到了，我不知道该怎么写诗 _________________ 马彦：艺术与自然平行

山城子
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Posted: 2008-04-18 06:30:05 Post subject:

马彦 wrote:

来了，我看到了，我不知道该怎么写诗

问好朋友！是说我写得不自然吗？
——我会努力的！

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