荆山云
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Joined: 27 Feb 2008
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 Posted: 2008-03-27 22:02:01 Post subject: [原创]【中吕*朝天子】梅 |
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北风，雪中。
银井冰花共。
疏枝淡影暗香浓，
春在枝头动。
一缕烟轻，
几层云重，
诗情天上纵。
笛横，月朦，
半枕孤山梦。 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2008-03-28 06:31:27 Post subject: |
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诗情天上纵
半枕孤山梦
如此诗情，欣赏。
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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是有缘
秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008
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| Posted: 2008-03-28 07:14:41 Post subject: |
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好词，喜读之。
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蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情 |
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荆山云
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| Posted: 2008-03-28 23:54:19 Post subject: |
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| 黄洋界 wrote: |
诗情天上纵
半枕孤山梦
如此诗情，欣赏。 |
谢谢雅评。 |
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荆山云
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Joined: 27 Feb 2008
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| Posted: 2008-03-28 23:55:21 Post subject: |
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谢谢。问好朋友。 |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2008-03-29 05:17:43 Post subject: |
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| "春在枝头动","诗情天上纵"，“半枕孤山梦”，好句！ |
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荆山云
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Joined: 27 Feb 2008
Posts: 22
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| Posted: 2008-03-29 22:00:41 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
| "春在枝头动","诗情天上纵"，“半枕孤山梦”，好句！ |
谢谢朋友雅评。 |
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荆山云
童生
Joined: 27 Feb 2008
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| Posted: 2008-04-03 17:32:07 Post subject: |
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| 欢迎朋友指点。 |
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