彦杰
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Joined: 02 Apr 2008
Posts: 4
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 Posted: 2008-04-02 20:42:00 Post subject: 就说这车青辣椒 |
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大爷一个提成
二爷一个回扣
三爷一个转卖
四爷一个倒手
新鲜鲜一车青辣椒
被当成棒子面团
揉了又揉
从车厢揉进库房
从菜窖揉进竹笼
从心算揉进珠算
从摆手揉进点头
直到揉成出土文物
才与菜篮子邂逅
休瞧它
已是面黄神枯皮也皱
身价儿
却长了硬骨头
毛毛钱的牙齿太软
块块钱直吐舌头
愿辣 只得愿挨
气瘦了
大钞二斤五花肉
菜篮儿大骂土地心变黑
农二哥喊冤又赌咒
妈妈的
一车青辣椒也要勾引一股铜臭
搅得城乡的情感也变馊
工农的血管一旦接通了
勒死你
刮邪风的恶花狗 |
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hepingdao
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Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 8106
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| Posted: 2008-04-02 20:51:36 Post subject: |
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很生动，欢迎彦杰兄
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半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760
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| Posted: 2008-04-02 23:48:12 Post subject: |
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| 呵呵，这个谐趣~不错，问好! |
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杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
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韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
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| Posted: 2008-04-03 16:41:34 Post subject: |
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随便折腾吧，有啥办法！
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nobody
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Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
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| Posted: 2008-04-03 23:18:51 Post subject: |
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生动的角度和语言。
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