田建勋 秀才
Joined: 29 Jan 2007 Posts: 109
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Posted: 2008-03-29 06:56:34 Post subject: 七绝*春景 |
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远黛轻描春色匀,柳眉初画碧妆新。
桃花风里频招手,粉靥盈盈似故人。
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-29 10:43:33 Post subject: |
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人面桃花,笑靥迎人,春色好,心情好。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2008-03-30 05:20:55 Post subject: |
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春色好景如佳人。妙! |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-31 13:08:20 Post subject: |
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春意盎然,清新、欢快! |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
晓松Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-02 19:02:21 Post subject: |
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记忆中田兄善于写春天的诗。这篇更是喻人于景。 |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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田建勋 秀才
Joined: 29 Jan 2007 Posts: 109
田建勋Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-03 06:04:07 Post subject: |
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感谢老师们的玉评,一一问好! |
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