冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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 Posted: 2008-03-31 13:19:25 Post subject: 铁鸟凌空 |
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铁鸟凌空
湛湛蓝天缕缕云,
关山万里拥朝暾.
凌空铁鸟知何去,
可载鹡鸰一片心? |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2008-03-31 15:00:09 Post subject: |
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以问句结尾，遐想翩翩。冰清触目皆诗，问好！
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2008-03-31 17:05:32 Post subject: |
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| 欣赏。 |
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
| Posted: 2008-04-01 15:15:52 Post subject: |
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谢二位版主雅赞.
我家离机场不远,每天从窗口见飞机起落,思乡之情油然而生,《铁鸟凌空》就这这样把我的心情实打实地记录下来了. |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
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| Posted: 2008-04-02 18:14:08 Post subject: |
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| 欣赏铁鸟！诗人俯仰皆是诗。记得冰清老师乘飞机西行，联想到夸父追日，生动又形象。 |
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