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《一半的一半》
合心
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PostPosted: 2008-03-23 07:15:03    Post subject: 《一半的一半》 Reply with quote

《一半的一半》

将一半的世界
展开,我依然想用
蓝色描述

絮凝的晚霞浸润
另一半的天空早已封装
在想此后
如何海浪般欢快
海藻般沉没

默数一半的一半
想用目光凝住
每一意象的延伸

即将升起的黎明
定是源于另一半的海底
否则,我的眼中
怎会涌出滚烫的温度

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PostPosted: 2008-03-23 07:47:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

情深意切 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-04-01 21:09:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

写得比较利索。
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PostPosted: 2008-04-01 21:26:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

即将升起的黎明
定是源于另一半的海底
否则,我的眼中
怎会涌出滚烫的温度

不错~题目很新颖
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