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四月，渐行渐远的云

悠子
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Posted: 2008-04-01 08:26:56 Post subject: 四月，渐行渐远的云

四月，渐行渐远的云等待迟迟而来的春雨比梦清，洗涤出鲜明从枝头抽出点点红黄青绿遍野开满的小花用尽所有的坦诚，清淡飘洒一种旷远的幽静一种波澜的轻盈停下来。静下来。一路走去的风，不会在意翻阅一下擦肩而过的花香咀嚼那一波不堪盈手的空灵梦里梦外，把美好时光拉长 04/01/2008

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Posted: 2008-04-01 08:27:56 Post subject:

美景好诗

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Posted: 2008-04-01 08:37:39 Post subject:

黑～我也用了不堪！你的改改吧，用不足？ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-04-01 08:41:17 Post subject:

那你白~一下，你改 (在哪儿，偶没看见)

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Posted: 2008-04-01 08:44:07 Post subject: 问好水水，很久不见~

白水 Moonlight wrote:

美景好诗

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Posted: 2008-04-01 08:58:25 Post subject:

改我的好了，一来还没发，二来你也不一定改。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-04-01 09:02:20 Post subject:

你够黑的啊，还没发出来，只能排队等替补吧(如果我改的话)

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Posted: 2008-04-01 09:09:42 Post subject:

因为这样而改就没道理，如果。所以，你改不改都有点麻烦！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-04-01 16:16:23 Post subject:

春天的颜色，象是你的衣裳 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-04-01 16:18:32 Post subject:

特别喜欢"翻阅一下擦肩而过的花香"这一句

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Posted: 2008-04-01 21:54:43 Post subject: 嘻嘻~~花姑娘~~~~

是有缘 wrote:

春天的颜色，象是你的衣裳

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Posted: 2008-04-02 07:52:24 Post subject: 你就是麻烦~

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

因为这样而改就没道理，如果。所以，你改不改都有点麻烦！

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Posted: 2008-04-02 07:53:32 Post subject: 那别忘了夹张叶子书签:)

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特别喜欢"翻阅一下擦肩而过的花香"这一句

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Posted: 2008-04-02 10:40:09 Post subject:

The strong color and contrast always has its way _________________ 这有点麻烦

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Posted: 2008-04-02 14:48:01 Post subject:

再写五月~~~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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