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《相思》(旧作)

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Posted: 2008-03-25 17:03:55 Post subject: 《相思》(旧作)

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Posted: 2008-03-30 02:46:01 Post subject:

不一定能感动路人，但一定能感动那个相关的人。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-03-30 02:49:29 Post subject:

对整的诗句～要学会打破它！

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Posted: 2008-03-31 06:06:01 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

不一定能感动路人，但一定能感动那个相关的人。

很好的一个评
即使，跑进诗里
也是神不知
鬼不觉

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Posted: 2008-03-31 22:09:48 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

不一定能感动路人，但一定能感动那个相关的人。

谢谢评阅。问好！

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Posted: 2008-03-31 22:10:47 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

对整的诗句～要学会打破它！

多谢指教。敬礼！

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Posted: 2008-03-31 22:13:42 Post subject:

千里 wrote:

nobody wrote:

不一定能感动路人，但一定能感动那个相关的人。

很好的一个评
...

问好。

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Posted: 2008-04-16 17:13:40 Post subject:

美好的相思读来琅琅上口只是节奏最好有一点变化 _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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