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西江月—清明

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-03-30 22:42:17 Post subject: 西江月—清明

雨去窗明神暗，风来袖里身寒。红桃初艳卧枝边，又是王孙绿遍。垂泪潸然荒冢，飞思感叹豪轩。此情歌韵赋琴弦，谁诉西江月怨？

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Posted: 2008-03-31 05:23:54 Post subject:

欣赏，问好！ _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

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Posted: 2008-03-31 07:13:04 Post subject:

佳词美画，相得益彰。垂泪潸然荒冢飞思感叹豪轩这两句形神兼备，欣赏。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冰清
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Posted: 2008-03-31 12:59:20 Post subject:

凄婉！

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-03-31 16:48:46 Post subject:

郑达夫 wrote:

欣赏，问好！

谢谢，问好达夫兄！

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-03-31 16:50:32 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

佳词美画，相得益彰。
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谢谢黄老点评，问好！

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Posted: 2008-03-31 16:52:17 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

凄婉！

偶书襟怀，问候您！

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Posted: 2008-03-31 19:54:35 Post subject:

写景抒情自然。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-03-31 21:56:33 Post subject:

是有缘 wrote:

写景抒情自然。

谢谢点评！

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Posted: 2008-04-02 18:37:09 Post subject:

垂泪潸然荒冢，飞思感叹豪轩。先铺垫，然后升华。问好mm！

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-04-02 22:44:40 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

垂泪潸然荒冢，飞思感叹豪轩。先铺垫，然后升华。
问好mm！

谢谢gg的点评，
问好gg！

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