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[鲜诗出炉] 雨后遇见云雀（修改稿）

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2008-03-30 23:24:38 Post subject: [鲜诗出炉] 雨后遇见云雀（修改稿）

雨后遇见云雀把春天的泪留给青草把春天的我晾在河边云雀你腾空而上…… 云雀你一路欢鸣…… 高过紫燕和白鹭迎风振翅播撒歌声…… 牛只沉默啃草人只埋头钓鱼只有孤高的云雀唱响天风…… 拍痛流云…… 我刚绕过水坑天就空了飞歌的生命我的仰望追寻云雀的幻影…… 我的心事成了云中的歌声…… 2008-03-29下午4：00绵远河畔 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2008-03-30 23:42:50 Post subject:

很诗意啊~问好周！

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Posted: 2008-03-31 01:14:30 Post subject:

写得很随意.学习. _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2008-03-31 02:50:17 Post subject:

流畅的诗意,学习！

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Posted: 2008-03-31 14:05:51 Post subject:

代春天问候明月、少君和荷梦！感谢欣赏和鼓励！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2008-04-01 03:51:00 Post subject:

作了一点修改。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2008-04-01 04:17:58 Post subject:

不错!~!!!! _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2008-04-01 08:36:10 Post subject:

精益求精

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Posted: 2008-04-01 17:04:46 Post subject:

代春天问好海军和白水！感谢鼓励！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2008-04-10 02:33:28 Post subject:

“新诗改罢自长吟”。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2008-04-10 14:03:32 Post subject:

呵呵，道模诗成慕云雀。。

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Posted: 2008-04-10 21:31:27 Post subject:

灵动问好 _________________ 莞君

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Posted: 2008-04-12 02:17:15 Post subject:

问好荷梦和莞君！愿更多的人学会仰望，能听到云雀的歌声。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2008-04-12 03:44:07 Post subject: 我的仰望追寻云雀的幻影……

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

“新诗改罢自长吟”。

我的仰望追寻云雀的幻影……

我的心事成了云中的歌声……

很认真啊，问好周～

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Posted: 2008-04-12 04:28:42 Post subject:

品读问好你 _________________ 莞君

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2008-04-12 17:42:03 Post subject:

向明月和莞君致以春天的问候！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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