博弈
榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006
Posts: 4381
Location: SFO
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 Posted: 2008-03-30 01:27:50 Post subject: 诗盗劫色 |
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劫色
或许前世我为罪恶
提刀入山林
埋伏为劫色
山鬼影憧憧
月衣云鬓，迤逦是妳的风姿
竹叶语细琐，我便回头
见山筍据坡自雄，烦！
对他们说：替你“引刀成一快”
他们说：汝亦夜山筍也。成！
砍了无韵的草莽，来到妳的面前
臣服地磕头，闻妳的脚趾蹂踏我而过—
于是，今世我得以清白地见到妳！
（周末胡写，不是指诗盗，刚好用到这两字） 
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2008-03-30 04:44:42 Post subject: |
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哈, 绝妙  |
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詩盜喜裸評
进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007
Posts: 2984
Location: 台湾，台北
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| Posted: 2008-03-30 07:55:19 Post subject: |
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挺好哪，劫色是不错的工作！俺喜欢这活儿～
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悠子
举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008
Posts: 1383
Location: US
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| Posted: 2008-03-30 09:41:00 Post subject: |
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| 哈, 绝妙 (ZT) |
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上城
进士出身
Joined: 15 Mar 2007
Posts: 2024
Location: 江夏黄鹤楼
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| Posted: 2008-03-30 16:33:04 Post subject: |
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博弈太高了。我们还停留在组句的阶段，他就颠覆了字、词、篇~~~~
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