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【倒春寒】
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PostPosted: 2008-03-28 15:18:33    Post subject: 【倒春寒】 Reply with quote
【倒春寒】


无疑，我们有几天好天气
春日，蝶舞莺唱
人们集体赶往野外看桃花
梨花已谢，桃花隐忍不发

纸上预告：有场倒春寒
白昼，我们被燥热和寄望迷惑
和夜对弈，不断修正条约
当尖利的呼啸从深处袭来
你端坐无语。笑，果然——

这坏天气，冻死童子骨，冻死她
她像猫卷紧身体。开始下雨
一整夜的雨，都在屋檐上滴响
泥泞了明天，约赴春天的小径
你说：天气再冷，也要记得看桃花

呵呵，发完这首，去看桃花～
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PostPosted: 2008-03-28 15:42:24    Post subject: Reply with quote
你端坐无语。笑，果然——
很漂亮
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PostPosted: 2008-03-28 15:55:31    Post subject: Reply with quote
无疑，我们有几天好天
春日，蝶舞莺唱
人们集体赶往野外看桃花
梨花已谢，桃花隐忍不发......我去看梨花.
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PostPosted: 2008-03-28 17:12:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
明月不知何处去，桃花山上笑春风。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-28 19:33:24    Post subject: Reply with quote
泥泞了明天，约赴春天的小径
你说：天气再冷，也在要记得看桃花
这里有味!!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-28 19:49:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
月亮好幸福, TORONTO今天只能看雪花 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-03-29 02:22:55    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
你端坐无语。笑，果然——
很漂亮

问好岛～
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PostPosted: 2008-03-29 02:27:22    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
月亮好幸福, TORONTO今天只能看雪花 Very Happy

听说东北也在下雪呢，昨天一夜寒风和雨，今天只剩下花蕊了，又冷又下小雨，还刮着风，可怜我为今天准备的裙子都没法穿，呵呵，不过还是转了四个多少时的山～
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PostPosted: 2008-03-29 02:28:22    Post subject: Reply with quote
子花 wrote:
泥泞了明天，约赴春天的小径
...


子花好～
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PostPosted: 2008-03-29 02:30:48    Post subject: Reply with quote
赵福治 wrote:
无疑，我们有几天好天
...

谢福治兄弟～
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PostPosted: 2008-03-29 02:33:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
William Zhou周道模 wrote:
明月不知何处去，桃花山上笑春风。

呵呵，好句子，问好周～龙泉驿的桃花怎样？上个礼拜应该是最好看的时候，这个礼拜都谢了～
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PostPosted: 2008-03-29 06:03:24    Post subject: Reply with quote
学习姐姐的诗歌 握手问好您
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PostPosted: 2008-03-29 06:08:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
天 f气再冷，也要记得看桃花
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PostPosted: 2008-03-30 03:06:48    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好莞君，看见你最近的成绩，很惊喜，为你高兴～
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PostPosted: 2008-03-30 03:08:03    Post subject: 　 Reply with quote
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天 f气再冷，也要记得看桃花


问好合心，多批～
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PostPosted: 2008-05-01 19:53:50    Post subject: Reply with quote
呵呵 无，发完这首，去看桃花～
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