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藏在秋天里(短诗八首)
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PostPosted: 2008-03-24 02:59:10    Post subject: 藏在秋天里(短诗八首) Reply with quote

《藏在秋天里》

说到来临的秋天
联想到树叶。你躲藏在茂密的阔叶林里
如果有更多的落叶遮挡,如果我还安静地呆在原地
不再喊你。你也不现身向我招手
大块的云还在头顶上飘浮着,小鸟不再婉转于内心
就看不见你那双始终微笑着的
很能说话的眼睛

《舒服》

我无精打采
已经没有情趣,把远山的风景再欣赏一遍
昨夜吃东西坏了肚子,今天
我在临街阳台上
看着从西向东,或者从东向西来往的人
他们远离我,这时候,一定比我有
更舒服的心情

《一个人走》

越来越凉的秋风
除了突然遭遇一场爱情,心真的暖不起来
斜挎个大包,行走在马路旁,有人用异样的眼光看我
被看多次了,有些不自在
裸露的手臂阵阵发凉,似乎我是个搞欺诈的小生意人
有两个外地人在炭锅上烙饼卖
我拐进弯曲的小巷,两边红砖高墙,没有古典的味道
此刻,即使有把檀香木扇
也摇不起来

《走过去》

几片树叶落下
和你一起登山,跨上一层又一层台阶,直达山顶
翻过这座山,就是下一个村庄
夏日里旺盛的狗尾巴花不见了,野菊花一路开放
看过收割后的稻田,走过阡陌小道
就是明天了

《秋风起》

风还不猛,南方的秋天
已来了一段时间,有点冷飕飕的风,迎面吹来
我裹了裹衣服,继续往前走
冷飕飕的风继续吹来,携带几片落叶,一些痕迹
翻过我身边不见了
我双手抱在胸前,往屋檐下走
不像小时侯,好奇地追着落叶,顺着风去的方向
跑一段路

《周末》

上午睡觉,听流行音乐
翻阅两三本书
下午喝茶,看电视体育频道,厌恶韩剧
上网跟几位朋友聊天
在黄昏来临之前去体育场慢跑几圈
美其名锻炼身体,往往是三天打鱼两天晒网
落实在计划里

《陷阱》

走进深谷
两边陡坡,树枝一直没离开头顶
叶片上附着冷冷的阳光,没有一丝风,不摇晃
没有鸟鸣,没有涧水声
寂静,很稳定。不知是误入了谁人预设的气氛
还是走进了自己的陷阱。不是恐惧
是欲望被磨损

《菊花》

菊花蓬勃盛开
我不知道。他们告诉了我,但离我很远
我看到了很多花瓣,秋季里,在露台上静静地开放
我不说,他们也不知道
多少繁华衰败人事变迁,谁能明白
季节变换太快
我不在其中,不注意时令
不是随意开的花
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PostPosted: 2008-03-24 06:54:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢这样不露声色的诗歌!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-24 16:40:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

沉稳生活的一组.
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PostPosted: 2008-03-25 05:42:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

最喜《走过去》和《菊花》,从容。。。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-25 16:42:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

情景交融~问好阿秀!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-29 01:57:16    Post subject: 谢谢 Reply with quote

陈亚伟 wrote:
喜欢这样不露声色的诗歌!

谢谢喜欢,问好!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-29 01:58:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
沉稳生活的一组.

问好
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PostPosted: 2008-03-29 01:59:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

荷梦 wrote:
最喜《走过去》和《菊花》,从容。。。

谢谢喜欢
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PostPosted: 2008-03-29 02:01:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
情景交融~问好阿秀!

问好,亲切握手
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PostPosted: 2008-03-29 05:34:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

从容,淡定~~~
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PostPosted: 2008-03-29 05:59:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

很好的几个 喜欢 莞君问好您
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