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街灯，点亮了夜的寂寞

悠子
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Posted: 2008-03-26 13:00:01 Post subject: 街灯，点亮了夜的寂寞

深浅不平的夜萦绕着虫鸣寂远的回声雾，潮湿的飘舞迷漫出一些不可触及的色泽街灯亮了点亮一地冰凉的寂寞暗淡的影，仍要不得已的走过每个孤单的角落失水样的叶子，倦倦的睡进鸟儿合拢的翅膀我费力地不踏入你梦的网 03/26/2008

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Posted: 2008-03-26 13:30:34 Post subject:

fascinating ['f/a/ sneiti/ng/ ] 形魅惑的;醉人的 _________________ 这有点麻烦

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Posted: 2008-03-26 20:04:51 Post subject:

捕梦网！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-26 20:49:33 Post subject:

喜欢,陶醉!

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Posted: 2008-03-26 20:58:54 Post subject: 问好飞狐兄！

飞狐 wrote:

喜欢,陶醉!

欢迎您来落尘！
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可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-26 21:09:40 Post subject:

谢谢詩盜!

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Posted: 2008-03-27 07:26:46 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

捕梦网！

捕梦网，让我想起dreamcatcher, 是美国印第安人挂在卧室的饰品，用来保佑儿童不做恶梦的。

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Posted: 2008-03-27 07:28:49 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

飞狐 wrote:

喜欢,陶醉!

欢迎您来落尘！

一起欢迎呀

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Posted: 2008-03-27 19:04:09 Post subject:

街灯月亮了点亮一在地冰凉的寂寞暗淡的影，仍要不得来已的走过每个孤单的角落我用劲地想挤进捕捉你的梦网 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-03-27 22:16:53 Post subject:

很诗意的寂寞 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2008-03-28 06:39:48 Post subject: :)

是有缘 wrote:

街灯月亮了
...

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Posted: 2008-03-28 06:40:52 Post subject: 很寂寞的诗意;)

hepingdao wrote:

很诗意的寂寞

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Posted: 2008-03-28 09:26:56 Post subject:

好诗好相片，相片也是一首诗。

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Posted: 2008-03-30 08:31:43 Post subject: 老童可以用吗？

悠子 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

捕梦网！

捕梦网，让我想起dreamcatcher, 是美国印第安人挂在卧室的饰品，用来保佑儿童不做恶梦的。

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可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-30 09:39:50 Post subject: 啊，老童，怎么忘了，当然可以~~

还有老顽童

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Posted: 2008-03-30 22:28:27 Post subject:

没注意，这个不错。。。尤其最后一段，想象很好 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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