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街灯,点亮了夜的寂寞
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PostPosted: 2008-03-26 13:00:01    Post subject: 街灯,点亮了夜的寂寞 Reply with quote


深浅不平的夜
萦绕着虫鸣寂远的回声
雾,潮湿的飘舞
迷漫出一些不可触及的色泽

街灯亮了
点亮一地冰凉的寂寞
暗淡的影,仍要不得已的
走过每个孤单的角落

失水样的叶子,倦倦的
睡进鸟儿合拢的翅膀
我费力地
不踏入你梦的网

03/26/2008
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啥么
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PostPosted: 2008-03-26 13:30:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

fascinating ['f/a/ sneiti/ng/ ] 形 魅惑的;醉人的
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PostPosted: 2008-03-26 20:04:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

捕梦网!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-26 20:49:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢,陶醉!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-26 20:58:54    Post subject: 问好飞狐兄! Reply with quote

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喜欢,陶醉!


欢迎您来落尘!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-26 21:09:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢詩盜!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-27 07:26:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
捕梦网!


捕梦网,让我想起dreamcatcher, 是美国印第安人挂在卧室的饰品,用来保佑儿童不做恶梦的。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-27 07:28:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
飞狐 wrote:
喜欢,陶醉!


欢迎您来落尘!

一起欢迎呀
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PostPosted: 2008-03-27 19:04:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

街灯月亮了
点亮一在地冰凉的寂寞
暗淡的影,仍要不得来已的
走过每个孤单的角落

我用劲地
想挤进捕捉你的梦网
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PostPosted: 2008-03-27 22:16:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

很诗意的寂寞
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PostPosted: 2008-03-28 06:39:48    Post subject: :) Reply with quote

是有缘 wrote:
街灯月亮了
...
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PostPosted: 2008-03-28 06:40:52    Post subject: 很寂寞的诗意;) Reply with quote

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很诗意的寂寞
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PostPosted: 2008-03-28 09:26:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗好相片,相片也是一首诗。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-30 08:31:43    Post subject: 老童可以用吗? Reply with quote

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诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
捕梦网!


捕梦网,让我想起dreamcatcher, 是美国印第安人挂在卧室的饰品,用来保佑儿童不做恶梦的。

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PostPosted: 2008-03-30 09:39:50    Post subject: 啊, 老童, 怎么忘了, 当然可以~~ Reply with quote

还有老顽童
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PostPosted: 2008-03-30 22:28:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

没注意,这个不错。。。尤其最后一段,想象很好
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