悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-26 13:00:01 Post subject: 街灯,点亮了夜的寂寞 |
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深浅不平的夜
萦绕着虫鸣寂远的回声
雾,潮湿的飘舞
迷漫出一些不可触及的色泽
街灯亮了
点亮一地冰凉的寂寞
暗淡的影,仍要不得已的
走过每个孤单的角落
失水样的叶子,倦倦的
睡进鸟儿合拢的翅膀
我费力地
不踏入你梦的网
03/26/2008 |
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啥么 秀才

Joined: 10 Jan 2008 Posts: 169
啥么Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-26 13:30:34 Post subject: |
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fascinating ['f/a/ sneiti/ng/ ] 形 魅惑的;醉人的 _________________ 这有点麻烦 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-26 20:04:51 Post subject: |
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捕梦网! _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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飞狐 童生
Joined: 26 Mar 2008 Posts: 22
飞狐Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-26 20:49:33 Post subject: |
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喜欢,陶醉! |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-26 20:58:54 Post subject: 问好飞狐兄! |
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欢迎您来落尘! _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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飞狐 童生
Joined: 26 Mar 2008 Posts: 22
飞狐Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-26 21:09:40 Post subject: |
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谢谢詩盜! |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-27 07:26:46 Post subject: |
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捕梦网,让我想起dreamcatcher, 是美国印第安人挂在卧室的饰品,用来保佑儿童不做恶梦的。 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-27 07:28:49 Post subject: |
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一起欢迎呀 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
是有缘Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-27 19:04:09 Post subject: |
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街灯月亮了
点亮一在地冰凉的寂寞
暗淡的影,仍要不得来已的
走过每个孤单的角落
我用劲地
想挤进捕捉你的梦网 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情 |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
hepingdaoCollection |
Posted: 2008-03-27 22:16:53 Post subject: |
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很诗意的寂寞 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-28 06:39:48 Post subject: :) |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-28 06:40:52 Post subject: 很寂寞的诗意;) |
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灯台小老鼠 童生
Joined: 19 Feb 2008 Posts: 82 Location: 中国广东广州 灯台小老鼠Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-28 09:26:56 Post subject: |
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好诗好相片,相片也是一首诗。 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-30 08:31:43 Post subject: 老童可以用吗? |
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悠子 wrote: |
捕梦网,让我想起dreamcatcher, 是美国印第安人挂在卧室的饰品,用来保佑儿童不做恶梦的。 |
_________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-30 09:39:50 Post subject: 啊, 老童, 怎么忘了, 当然可以~~ |
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还有老顽童 |
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红袖添乱 秀才

Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
红袖添乱Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-30 22:28:27 Post subject: |
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没注意,这个不错。。。尤其最后一段,想象很好 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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