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现代诗:无心之过
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PostPosted: 2007-01-14 11:07:57    Post subject: 现代诗:无心之过 Reply with quote

1,
揭开面纱
时间在叹息中停滞
眼窝,裹满苍凉的黑洞
唇角,还在喋喋不休地泛滥
那些关于爱和恨的记忆
就这么老去了
时间面前
我们,一败涂地

2,
别说
给痛苦留个缺口
哪怕
只是,一把剑到另把剑的距离

3,
回不到当初
手指伸开或者握紧,
寂寞如影随形
于是,我验证了多年以前的虚假
“挥挥衣袖,
不带走一片云彩!”

4,
他说“无心之过!”
她说“无心之过!”
那一场夏季的雪,打碎四季的梦
通往未来的路途
从此写满风霜

5,
苍凉的月下
我向影子鞠躬
那是,唯一忠诚的感叹号
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PostPosted: 2007-01-14 11:22:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

苍凉的月下
我向影子鞠躬
那是,唯一忠诚的感叹号

这个微型诗好
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PostPosted: 2007-01-14 11:24:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

速度真快。 Shocked 谢谢评阅。
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