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七绝道畔

郑达夫
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Posted: 2008-03-27 05:51:55 Post subject: 七绝道畔

七绝道畔道畔桃花笑亦痴, 柳芽纤细醒来迟. 山光水色春风暖, 绿染兰笺寄我思. _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

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Posted: 2008-03-27 08:12:26 Post subject:

以涧畔和道畔清溪流花泻春诗, 涧畔红白同根持. 艳阳更增人花艳, 暗叹早春雪压枝.

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Posted: 2008-03-27 10:00:48 Post subject:

好诗好和。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2008-03-30 05:44:08 Post subject:

谢谢两位先生！问好！ _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

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Posted: 2008-03-30 15:30:45 Post subject:

意蕴浓厚。

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Posted: 2008-03-31 05:25:58 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

意蕴浓厚。

问好莹雪斑竹！
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Posted: 2008-03-31 13:10:23 Post subject:

柳芽纤细醒来迟很有情趣。

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Posted: 2008-03-31 23:38:21 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

柳芽纤细醒来迟

很有情趣。

问好冰清老师！
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Posted: 2008-04-02 18:27:24 Post subject:

郑达夫 wrote:

七绝道畔

道畔桃花笑亦痴,
柳芽纤细醒来迟.
山光水色春风暖,
绿染兰笺寄我思.

道畔春色美！

灯台小老鼠 wrote:

以涧畔和道畔

清溪流花泻春诗,
涧畔红白同根持.
艳阳更增人花艳,
暗叹早春雪压枝.

涧畔泻春诗！

两首佳作让人感受到春天的气息~

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