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长诗：我不知道我是谁（之20、21、22、23）

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-03-26 04:59:30 Post subject: 长诗：我不知道我是谁（之20、21、22、23）

长诗：我不知道我是谁（之20、21、22、23） 20 我来的时候那些我为之而来的人隐去那些为我而来的人还没有显形我独坐高地看白云自脚下疾走 21 一列火车呼啸而来我举手想叫住它我开了口却突然忘失语汇我常常瞬间丢失思维我不知道我是谁 22 对着阳光，我弯腰捡拾我的影子起立的时候却丢自己在地上于是，影子直立阔步真身横卧地上紧追不舍血肉模糊 24 我喜欢黑夜我借着那层布幔完成一个极其缠绵的动作如摇电影镜头一样慢慢摇落我的头和目光直到唇和伤口完美对接我要从人类裂缝处找盐 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

莞君
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Posted: 2008-03-26 06:22:54 Post subject:

品干净的语言有思考问好 _________________ 莞君

明天朔
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Posted: 2008-03-26 07:42:05 Post subject:

认为，24首最好。

白水
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Posted: 2008-03-26 17:15:30 Post subject:

我来的时候那些我为之而来的人隐去那些为我而来的人还没有显形 http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=12437 冲浪, 做个梦吧, 在梦中你准知道你是谁了

nobody
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Posted: 2008-03-26 18:24:43 Post subject:

还不知道呢，哈哈。都不错。一列火车呼啸而来和 j 我举手想叫住它上y 我开 f了口了却突然忘失时语汇阿岛这软件有bug. cut and paste 有问题。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

hejun
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Posted: 2008-03-26 18:53:09 Post subject:

睿智，诗性。拜读何均问好 _________________ 何均

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-03-26 19:41:29 Post subject:

问好各位朋友。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-03-26 20:59:33 Post subject:

２０．２２．２４，喜欢这几个，怎么空了个　２３？

赵福治
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Posted: 2008-03-27 00:21:40 Post subject:

从人类裂缝处我找盐......思考的,质感的一组,喜欢.

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