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对联学作三十二
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PostPosted: 2008-03-13 18:36:53    Post subject: 对联学作三十二 Reply with quote

对联学作三十二


对句:花飞圃畔 傲雪狂飙观自在【达夫】
出句:雪舞天涯 凌波微步任逍遥【桐花】

对:花飞桐畔 觅影孤帆 酣蝶梦 【达夫】
出:雪舞天涯 凌波微步任逍遥【桐花】
(ID:刺桐飞花 孤帆远影 蝴蝶梦 )
(ID:雪舞天涯 凌波微步 逍遥九九)

对句:雪韵清映堪绝色【达夫】
出句:梅香暗涌不输春【巫逖】

对:连长浇青草,连长连长。[达夫]
出:将军下象棋,将军将军。[山顶]

出句:北河边,孤帆远影映深谷。[达夫]
出句:西海岸,一缕夕阳轻楝窗。[山顶]
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出句:平分秋色山与水【菀眉】
对句:尽揽春光草连天【达夫】

对句:宛水清眸含羞送【达夫】
出句:如花笑靥自心开【菀眉】
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PostPosted: 2008-03-14 00:00:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

赏读,问好
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PostPosted: 2008-03-14 04:05:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢第一第四第六第七联,第七联的“绽“字换”送“字,如何?
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PostPosted: 2008-03-14 07:19:13    Post subject: Re: 喜欢第一第四第六第七联,第七联的“绽“字... Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
喜欢第一第四第六第七联,第七联的“绽“字换”送“字,如何?


谢谢先生!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-18 16:42:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

也喜欢六、七二联。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-26 20:01:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

是有缘 wrote:
也喜欢六、七二联。


谢谢!问候先生~~
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