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自度曲.还珠泪

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-01-14 02:01:54 Post subject: 自度曲.还珠泪

进也难，退亦难，怎得秋心分两半。离也难，合更难，望断天涯人不还。皆道那、相思本是无情物，又如何，柳絮杨花同聚散。声声叹，叹不尽荣辱辛酸。频频看，看不完浪礁险滩。似这般，魂梦深深枉纠缠，倒莫若，把泪儿、赠君一半。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-01-14 04:51:33 Post subject: 感人之作, 临屏试和.

自度曲<还珠泪> 涌也难, 涸也难, 冬冷泉眼未曾干. 留也难, 走更难, 梦里暗香何日还. 莫道是, 游子吟断思乡曲, 有谁知, 一缕丝绢系两端? 箫笛淡, 七孔流尽声声慢, 心事颤, 玉指三更抚琴弦. 为哪般, 云缭雾绕伴星月, 终难悔, 前世泪, 凝墨硯盘.

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Posted: 2007-01-14 07:31:41 Post subject:

看得有些呆~~~~~ 谢谢。暗香收藏。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-01-14 07:42:27 Post subject:

MM, WHY呆? 不知自度曲之旋律, 只好自度一次了

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Posted: 2007-01-14 07:49:51 Post subject:

我是随心所写。自度曲本是由自己而定。不过我一开始就给他用的平仄换韵的方式。可你短时间内能和出这么好的词，当真高才。意境又远在暗香之上。暗香惭愧。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-01-14 09:25:21 Post subject:

羡慕一下两位神仙妹妹从古书卷里剪下来的随手那么一抛满眼流光溢彩 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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Posted: 2007-01-14 09:34:32 Post subject:

_________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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Posted: 2007-01-14 10:56:31 Post subject:

和平岛 wrote:

羡慕一下
两位神仙妹妹
从古书卷里剪下来的
随手那么一抛
满眼流光溢彩
Very Happy

白水是MM。天。我一直以为是帅哥。真走眼了。寒。
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Posted: 2007-01-14 10:59:05 Post subject:

暗香如沁 wrote:

和平岛 wrote:

羡慕一下
两位神仙妹妹
从古书卷里剪下来的
随手那么一抛
满眼流光溢彩
Very Happy

白水是MM。天。我一直以为是帅哥。真走眼了。寒。

你不是第一个上当受骗的

还有向白水兄表达爱慕之情的妹妹呢
Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-01-14 11:00:02 Post subject:

和平岛 wrote:

谢谢和平岛大哥这么美丽的图。收藏了。
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Posted: 2007-01-14 11:04:54 Post subject:

暗香如沁 wrote:

和平岛 wrote:

羡慕一下
两位神仙妹妹
从古书卷里剪下来的
随手那么一抛
满眼流光溢彩
Very Happy

白水是MM。天。我一直以为是帅哥。真走眼了。寒。

MM别寒, PEACE这是怕我和他抢MM, BLAAAAH . 真玉是玉, 假玉是石头 Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-01-14 11:07:13 Post subject:

白水 wrote:

暗香如沁 wrote:

和平岛 wrote:

羡慕一下
两位神仙妹妹
从古书卷里剪下来的
随手那么一抛
满眼流光溢彩
Very Happy

白水是MM。天。我一直以为是帅哥。真走眼了。寒。

MM别寒, PEACE这是怕我和他抢MM, BLAAAAH . 真玉是玉, 假玉是石头 Very Happy

真玉是石头, 假玉也是
把石头和玉全都留下
Cool

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Posted: 2007-01-14 11:11:44 Post subject:

这意见我支持。真的假的都留我暗香这好了。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-01-14 21:20:39 Post subject:

你们二位可真是珠和碧联, 石头和玉都要, 这不是和氏碧吗?那还和我抢莲蓬吃

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Posted: 2007-01-15 02:09:39 Post subject:

嘿嘿。莲蓬是必须抢的，这石头和玉也是要的。谁让贪心不足呢。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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