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在湛蓝的天空里我的等待赤裸

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2008-03-25 02:16:34 Post subject: 在湛蓝的天空里我的等待赤裸

在湛蓝的天空里我的等待赤裸着任流过的风抚慰伤口这沉默的伤口掩蔽在宁静的微笑后等你不是我扯破了天空的一角无法逃离这个世界的折磨晴日的光芒就像刺一样把锐利的舌伸着等你的抚摸只是那个世纪留下的一种契约被今日的阳光晒的铮亮铮亮我的困惑与前世的伤痛铸成了一种沉默和你的微笑与温馨任我撕破一种又一种古老的束缚让你我的灵魂在这个湛蓝的天空里自由而幸福地呼吸着 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-03-25 03:08:56 Post subject:

读。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

溪语
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Posted: 2008-03-25 03:57:09 Post subject:

读并顶! _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-03-25 16:48:06 Post subject:

一些句子的语气节奏还要注意下~不错，继续多写!问好!

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