蓝郁
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Joined: 13 Nov 2007
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 Posted: 2008-03-17 20:49:03 Post subject: [原创]早春拾景 |
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风在夜里剪短了指甲
绵软的玉手轻轻抚上脸颊
浮动的暗香来不及捕捉
一转眼，黄色的蜡梅开了
你这头插黄花的漂亮妹妹
一层薄薄的蜡油替你遮掩风姿
万物在早春含蓄古典
我站在圃前
想象你率性骀荡的美丽
径边草色隐隐
凑近前去想看个究竟
去岁的枯草只腰身软了
一篷篷的绿意兀自在心底发芽
风才少了严冬的凌厉
春天就像只不安分的小兽
不声不响地潜进了身体
对季节敏感的人
在发酵般的的气流里
坐立不安 |
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William Zhou周道模
探花
Joined: 10 Jun 2007
Posts: 3950
Location: 中国四川广汉
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| Posted: 2008-03-18 01:48:03 Post subject: |
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写春景，有自己独特的感受和几个佳句。问好！
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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蓝郁
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| Posted: 2008-03-23 17:07:16 Post subject: |
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| William Zhou周道模 wrote: |
| 写春景，有自己独特的感受和几个佳句。问好！ |
感谢周先生回复鼓励。祝安~ |
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半溪明月
榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760
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| Posted: 2008-03-23 17:38:44 Post subject: |
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风才少了严冬的凌厉 l
春天就像只不安分的小兽
不声不响地潜进了身体
对季节敏感的人
北美枫在发酵般的的气流里
坐立不安
细腻的感觉~欣赏! |
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蓝郁
童生
Joined: 13 Nov 2007
Posts: 37
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| Posted: 2008-05-07 22:13:49 Post subject: |
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| 半溪明月 wrote: |
风才少了严冬的凌厉 l
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问候明月版主。感谢回复~ |
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