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《撕开孤独》

Holybolt
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Posted: 2008-03-21 03:17:14 Post subject: 《撕开孤独》

《撕开孤独》刘跃辰撕开孤独还能看到什么寂静的小溪依然流淌着雨天和阳光对于逐渐老化的躯体我只能把一场风吹进她的峡谷，以及她封冻多年的河流是否还需要思考那急速行走的人们和树木一旦停滞，空旷便接踵而来充塞住所有黑暗的角落我只能走在故事的开头这会让我暂时忘却结尾处那个流浪的符号 20080320 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/liuyuechen8

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-03-21 05:27:05 Post subject:

结尾很漂亮～欣赏！

赵福治
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Posted: 2008-03-21 22:09:56 Post subject:

结尾不错，多来交流。

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-03-22 00:52:05 Post subject:

诗歌有感觉，我也最喜欢结尾，耐品。。。

莞君
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Posted: 2008-03-22 05:16:23 Post subject:

欣赏首尾见功底问好 _________________ 莞君

下一个偶像是野兽
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Posted: 2008-03-22 10:52:54 Post subject:

呵呵，问好。并欣赏。 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

杨海军
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Posted: 2008-03-22 14:23:15 Post subject:

不错的诗歌．提一下！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

Holybolt
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Posted: 2008-03-23 01:24:04 Post subject:

谢谢各位的阅读握手！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/liuyuechen8

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