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PostPosted: 2008-03-21 04:43:19    Post subject: 邂逅 Reply with quote

准确的说,我们是在省城的一辆公交车上相遇的
公交车的终点是长途汽车站。我们虽然生活在同一个小城
已经好几年没有见过面了,我在单位做工人的时候
你是机关里的一个科长。我下岗的时候
你已经调到别的单位做了厂长。我们在公交车上互相寒暄
能看出来你很热情,像我失散多年的老朋友问寒问暖
对于我阐述的生活,你眉头拧紧的疙瘩比我还要凝重
下了公交车,我们走在通往长途汽车站的路上
我走的很慢,在售票窗口还是发现把你拉在了后面
我朝窗口递过去一张百元钞票,从里面扔出来两张车票
在高速路上,我一直在想,公交车上我有更好的理由提前下车
想到这些,我的脸是红的,慌乱中瞄了你一下
你微眯着眼睛,好像睡着的样子。车到小城,你醒了
你问我车票有用吗?我说没有。你说给我吧。
此时西边的云霞,正在一点一点的被黑暗蚕食
我有点反胃,也许中午吃了不好的东西
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PostPosted: 2008-03-21 07:16:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

记叙的不错,可是诗性少了~
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PostPosted: 2008-03-22 04:00:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
记叙的不错,可是诗性少了~

问好明月版,谢谢指点,拉萨奉茶。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-22 05:20:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

品读 问好兄
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PostPosted: 2008-03-22 09:52:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

还是老外习惯好。绝对不会给别人买票,别人也绝对不会期待有人帮买票。没那么多虚伪的面子问题。
其实这厂长够清廉,报销那点能贪几个啊,哈哈 Laughing
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