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《再品白开水》
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PostPosted: 2008-03-21 08:17:01    Post subject: 《再品白开水》 Reply with quote

《再品白开水》
文/冷巉

白开水真的好喝,却难以下咽。无来由的伤感,冲撞着夜的寒潮,寂静的暗由始至终带给我某种诱惑,不知是否独自的私语。
曾经希望的天空,用来宽容的渴望,竟在此时流放的斑驳逝去。
我的天堂,宁静的夜,是否还让我用精神来装扮我的星空。
一种心情,一份记忆,是否还在用心愿记录某种不安定的思绪。
属于我的暗夜啊,平淡中诠释曾经被修剪过的四季,某种私语中的魔咒,是否能将现实转移。
曾经历练中的甜蜜,是否可以在某个午后的时日,证明存在的快乐,此时只想和你同语。
梦中的景色,是否还在证明着永远的过去,漫漫的长夜,是否感知着飞翔的精灵。
不知哪个环节出现了隐喻,将暗夜延续。
白开水的童话,已经响起。低音早已变成闪动的星,布满梦的天堂。
虽然梦早已被窗帘遮掩,但眼泪早已抖落满目的光线,在静谧的天堂收获着拼接的私语。
也许是暗夜的赋予,这杯浓高很高的白开水将笼罩着我的房间,控制着我的呼吸,却消解着我的心跳,将于这暗夜的长度拉长。
暗夜很静,如冷淬的冰雪,穿透着我的神经,由寒及始,由冷及热,突然之间,打破了我擦身而过的永远,虽然不知这种永远是不是巅峰之间,不知这种束缚能否将生活中太多的烦恼忘掉......
而此时,此时,我只是一杯白开水......

1:09 2008-2-18
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PostPosted: 2008-03-21 17:44:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

只能说一句:希望你开心起来!!!
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白水
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PostPosted: 2008-03-21 19:26:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

和我比你该高兴才是, 我只是一杯白水, 随便哪个小河沟里就能取一瓢. 愿你快乐 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-03-22 19:45:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

"曾经历练中的甜蜜,是否可以在某个午后的时日,证明存在的快乐,此时只想和你同语。
梦中的景色,是否还在证明着永远的过去,漫漫的长夜,是否感知着飞 北美枫翔的精灵。"


诗一般的语言,诗一般的情。
问好,远握!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-24 00:06:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢三位朋友。
有时间应该写个后记,呵呵~~``````
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