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破阵子五首
暗香如沁
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PostPosted: 2008-03-16 06:51:02    Post subject: 破阵子五首 Reply with quote

破阵子.桃花图(步韵若水秋容)

一抹斜阳踏水,半江细浪追风。柳慕桃花花问燕,几度西来几度东?相思不语中。
未羡高楼倚翠,但求四海漂红。唱尽芳菲零落去,更著香魂分外浓。笑将泪自慵。


破阵子.春夜(步韵若水秋容)

凉月一弯戏水,清风四两拨云。柳绿桃红齐斗艳,应谢东君春色匀。三分香染尘。
袅袅婷婷莲步,优优雅雅罗裙。酒意还从诗意冷,诗意无须酒意新。轻书花露痕。


破阵子.题画(步韵子建兄)

几树花开碧水,一行柳系闲云。千里行舟还向晚,万丈青山色自匀。不沾半点尘。
疑入瑶池仙境,似披翠缕纱裙。幽苑听歌人未老,著画吟诗梦更新。烟锁冷月痕。


破阵子.春情(步韵燕山兄)

几处花肥紫陌?几回柳瘦微风?谁许东君江上过,一点春心分外浓。其情不语中。
空羡夕阳追梦,徒劳皓月临峰。百转千回愁未绝,爱恨交缠累与胸。遐思翩若鸿。


破阵子.画春(步韵酒剑兄)

嫩柳如烟淡淡,诗情似水潺潺。锦绣江山凭指画,莫要春宵空倚栏。天还我不还。
方寸屏中得趣,一枝笔上偷闲。道是幽香魂未绝,心海扬帆万里船。悠然醉醒间。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2008-03-16 10:34:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

读破阵子五首,顿感春风拂面,春意盎然。
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是有缘
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PostPosted: 2008-03-18 16:28:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

好词,欣赏了。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-18 17:09:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜读暗香好词,学习了。
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荆山云
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PostPosted: 2008-03-19 18:12:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏香君好词。问好。
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荆山云
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PostPosted: 2008-03-19 18:35:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏香君好词。问好。
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老山
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PostPosted: 2008-03-20 20:04:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

景美情浓,学习了!
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游向高原的鱼
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PostPosted: 2008-03-21 04:31:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

春风着意到笔端,看君挥手出华篇!
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