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自由(一句话诗)

上城
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Posted: 2008-01-07 15:29:07 Post subject: 自由(一句话诗)

自由先把自己锁在屋子外，不得进民主我可在一边保持沉默人权哥们，咱们去喝两盅正义我、你、他都在呐喊罪恶让一只风筝飞上了天公平你一枪将我击毙 2008.1.8/白 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

nobody
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Posted: 2008-01-07 15:31:45 Post subject:

写的很魔鬼！ _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

上城
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Posted: 2008-01-07 15:34:44 Post subject:

彼此,彼此我只是个小鬼.回家哦 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2008-01-07 17:00:15 Post subject:

很自由哦~

迪拜
同进士出身

Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588

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Posted: 2008-01-08 12:18:24 Post subject:

格言

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-01-11 04:09:16 Post subject:

等您功成名就再贴出来也不嫌晚。白小姐特意委託我向您問好，您好啊！））））23 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

鹿向亮
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Joined: 11 Mar 2008
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Posted: 2008-03-19 19:16:48 Post subject:

这种概念性的东西不好写诗性差了点问好 _________________ 通联:(065202)京东燕郊开发区高楼镇北京经济技术职业学院鹿向亮 http://blog.sina.com.cn/luxiangliang

枫桥
秀才

Joined: 28 May 2007
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Location: 中国北京
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Posted: 2008-03-20 01:18:26 Post subject:

看到语言的另一面。想起当年北岛的一字诗《生活》——网 _________________ 锋镝牢囚取次过，依然不费我弦歌。死犹未肯输心法，贫也岂能奈我何。

上城
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Posted: 2008-03-20 03:27:13 Post subject:

感谢nobody、半溪明月、诗盗、迪拜、鹿向亮、枫桥众兄赏读。这是去年一月八日的，又被翻出来了。这么快就过去四个月了。枫桥兄说的太那个了，我的诗那能跟北岛先生比，人家是魔鬼，我只不过是个小鬼。还有，诗盗的我还没跟他说：—— 人要是功成名就了，就离死亡不远了。枫桥的一首小诗，我都会背了：跟风走了很久，很久发现风也在飘零精粹啊。再问好。 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

下一个偶像是野兽
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Posted: 2008-03-20 10:02:17 Post subject:

问好。 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

luoxuan720
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Posted: 2008-04-05 20:58:35 Post subject:

过于激进，尚需控制。 _________________ 从01年到现在，一拖再拖，拖到WIMAX来抢频谱资源了，TD你以后怎么办啊？

杨海军
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Posted: 2008-04-06 00:42:47 Post subject:

让人清醒!!! _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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