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（独领风骚-仿波德莱尔风格）世界打开一本新书

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Posted: 2008-03-11 19:03:36 Post subject: （独领风骚-仿波德莱尔风格）世界打开一本新书

仿波德莱尔[黄昏的和谐]体式拙作世界打开一本新书听街上急匆的脚步先睹为快追赶时尚谁肯落伍听街上急匆的脚步我们是伟大的消费时代追赶时尚谁肯落伍勤俭是过街的老鼠我们是伟大的消费时代挥霍才是我们的财富勤俭是过街的老鼠要把古老个训诫诅咒挥霍是我们的财富干杯莫错过免费的美酒要把古老个训诫诅咒吃光了地球再啃月球诗盗按曲元奇语意：波德莱尔，19世纪中叶法国大诗人[恶之花]的作者。 [恶之花]震动诗坛，培养了兰波等一代大诗人，浪漫主义现代主义都能从[恶之花]中找到源头。[忧郁的巴黎]是散文诗在世界上，走上成熟的开端被公认世界大诗人。善良的这面-诗盗、波德莱尔的裙子-伤城、再写善良的一面-诗盗、

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Posted: 2008-03-11 21:14:07 Post subject:

现实的思考 “波德莱尔” _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金

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Posted: 2008-03-11 21:14:59 Post subject:

这文句结构有意思！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-12 05:04:17 Post subject:

干杯，吃光了地球再啃月球～～不怕，危机促进人类智慧发展，以后人们就不用吃饭了，闻一闻气味就饱；每人戴个意念器，可以作无翅膀飞行，不用汽车，火车，飞机，等一切耗燃工具； _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-03-12 22:48:35 Post subject:

美是沉淀的金

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Posted: 2008-03-13 07:34:53 Post subject:

哇！吃光了地球再啃月球....... _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-03-14 22:49:59 Post subject:

曲兄介绍一下这位诗人与风格，让这首作品参与（读领风骚）单元如何？ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-14 23:59:01 Post subject:

是说波德莱尔吗19世纪中叶法国大诗人[恶之花]的作者 [恶之花]震动诗坛培养了兰波等一代大诗人浪漫主义现代主义都能从[恶之花]中找到源头[忧郁的巴黎]是散文诗在世界上走上成熟的开端被公认世界大诗人原参加[独领风骚]我是不是所答非所问我乡村中学教师诗的新兵

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Posted: 2008-03-15 14:32:45 Post subject:

恩，大家一样！俺研究研究再尝试练练！我把您的文与主贴编辑在一块，方便大家阅读。若有所误，还请告知。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-15 23:24:06 Post subject:

一切都好谢谢

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Posted: 2008-03-18 00:46:57 Post subject:

曲兄看看有没有差很多？ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-19 22:14:32 Post subject:

善良这的这面格式上与<<黄昏的和谐>>不太相似但是我觉得语言提炼的好这是直觉

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Posted: 2008-03-20 18:42:42 Post subject:

节奏很好。警譬中不乏幽默。语句有特色譬喻新奇。都是波德莱尔的特色。但我感觉，诗盗有声响，但颜色气味有些不够~~~ _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2008-03-20 19:30:50 Post subject:

惊劈新奇是波德来尔的特色是这样

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Posted: 2008-03-22 23:32:14 Post subject:

加个友情！我喜欢他操作罪恶的语言模式，可是我学了个四不像！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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