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没有你的日子

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Posted: 2008-03-18 22:57:36 Post subject: 没有你的日子

没有你的日子春天的心思总落在季节之后青山隐隐，绿水幽幽李白桃红似含愁一个人的脚步在春之外默默地行走没有你的日子夏日沉闷得让人无法忍受赤日炎炎，热浪滚滚晚上仍然定不下来的心听星空夜语，喋喋不休没有你的日子秋空寂寞，深邃得一无所有偶然经过的雁影，也不想作短暂的停留经霜的层林被丹心染得红透一雨更添一树愁没有你的日子冬眠的耳边刮不尽北风的怒吼活跃的生命全都学会了懒惰只有光秃秃的树枝在寒冷的夜风中颤抖没有你的日子有着说不完的无可奈何没有你的日子冰河的梦还要沉睡多久

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Posted: 2008-03-19 07:31:06 Post subject:

哎呀，是谁让俺们有缘兄一年四季的想念????安慰，安慰！ _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-03-19 13:36:14 Post subject:

没有你的日子真好！晕～ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-19 19:36:54 Post subject:

苏茉儿 wrote:

哎呀，是谁让俺们有缘兄一年四季的想念????安慰，安慰！

哈，空的。

你真好：）

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Posted: 2008-03-19 19:37:45 Post subject:

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没有你的日子真好！晕～

好，原来是女子。

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Posted: 2008-03-19 21:58:12 Post subject: 跟有缘兄开开玩笑！

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诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

没有你的日子真好！晕～

好，原来是女子。

女子曰好！男子曰？
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Posted: 2008-03-19 22:21:05 Post subject:

奇怪！有些回贴看不到？ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-22 07:29:44 Post subject:

没有你的日子，很不好

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Posted: 2008-03-22 22:01:46 Post subject:

诗盗呀~~失盗~~~我很晕~~！ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-03-22 23:22:44 Post subject: 女子！

红袖添乱 wrote:

诗盗呀~~失盗~~~我很晕~~！

女子晕的女子！
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Posted: 2008-03-23 08:00:42 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

是有缘 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

没有你的日子真好！晕～

好，原来是女子。

女子曰好！男子曰？

男：是田里干苦力活的（田里卖力的）。

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Posted: 2008-03-23 08:01:55 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

奇怪！有些回贴看不到？

谁的，好象不是俺的。

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Posted: 2008-03-23 08:06:52 Post subject:

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没有你的日子，很不好

是没劲！（因为：那时好的东西与偶无关，让俺不愉快的都来恼俺）。

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Posted: 2008-03-23 08:09:10 Post subject:

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诗盗呀~~失盗~~~我很晕~~！

没有你的日子，俺又晕又昏

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Posted: 2008-03-23 08:24:32 Post subject:

没有你的日子，偶找她／他～～～哈哈哈 _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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没有你的日子，偶找她／他～～～

哈哈哈 Very Happy

好，现代化（先代花）。

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