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我,诗意的爱着你!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-19 18:23:22    Post subject: 我,诗意的爱着你! Reply with quote


1、

夜,未央
春雨又霏霏
独倚小窗
任凭轻点眉心的雨滴
缓缓流入心底

心口处,绣着的
最珍贵的名字
如一朵含苞的桃花
轻轻舒绽
瓣瓣凝香
我快乐的眠在花心里
想你……

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风儿
一个响亮的呼哨
撞疼了眼角,迷朦之中
我看见醒来的阳光
正轻轻吻上花儿的脸庞
羞的我,低眉、巧笑

唧唧、喳喳
一串串清脆的啼啭
从燕儿的翅膀下
滑进心里,剪出一簇
碧玉的桃花妆

你,就这样幸福的坐在我心坎上
我,就这样诗意的爱着你
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PostPosted: 2008-03-19 18:23:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

切!班长,图片麻烦你,谢谢!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-19 18:52:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

我来啦
你编辑一下,就知道如何用了
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PostPosted: 2008-03-19 19:34:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

写得好。有人很幸福。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-19 21:46:04    Post subject: 谢岛主! Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
我来啦
你编辑一下,就知道如何用了


这些天忙!劳动您来真不好意思。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-19 21:48:13    Post subject: 抱歉、抱歉! Reply with quote

苏茉儿 wrote:
切!班长,图片麻烦你,谢谢!


服务不周,尚请海涵。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-20 19:16:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

一个愁字李请照写绝了一个春字被[北美枫]的才女们写活了
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PostPosted: 2008-03-20 20:57:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

第2段很好看
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PostPosted: 2008-03-21 07:10:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

唯美的情、境、句。。。。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-21 17:33:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

岛主,谢谢你啊。哈,比那班长还称职!:p

谢谢有缘兄,你就很幸福啊,还羡慕别人。

诗盗班长,海涵,茉儿的心没有海那么大,海涵不了,生气了,哼!

曲兄好,哇呀,茉儿和李清照的名字放一起,差点背过气去。Razz

谢谢袖子姐喜好!你喜好我开心。

谢谢荷梦赏读,茉儿请你喝杯茉莉花茶!

谢谢大家,Happy Easter to everyboday!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-22 07:18:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

第2段很好看(ZT).
茉儿好。我回来了。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-22 12:44:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

岛主,谢谢你啊。哈,比那班长还称职!
谢谢有缘兄,你就很幸福啊,还羡慕别人。
诗盗班长,海涵,茉儿的心没有海那么大,海涵不了,生气了,哼!
曲兄好,哇呀,茉儿和李清照的名字放一起,差点背过气去。
谢谢袖子姐喜好!你喜好我开心。
谢谢荷梦赏读,茉儿请你喝杯茉莉花茶!
谢谢大家,Happy Easter to everyoboday!

请你喝杯,茉莉花茶
羡慕开心的称职
赏读别人的幸福
差点和那名字放一起
谢谢Happy有海那么大
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