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姐姐
独孤九
童生


Joined: 15 Feb 2008
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PostPosted: 2008-03-19 00:26:00    Post subject: 姐姐 Reply with quote

不是故意的


手腕上的佛珠
已经散落在地上
我一边捡一边哭
小姨不顾别人的劝阻
依然劈头盖脸的打我
埋怨我没有让她见自己的姐姐
最后一面
小姨啊 是渴望给了我幻想
面对可怕的死亡
我却一直死抱着侥幸
直到现在
我还老觉着
我妈还会缓过来



姐姐


姐姐 姐姐
妈 小姨连声地叫你
姐姐 姐姐
妈 二舅也连声地叫你
姐姐 姐姐
妈 小舅正在赶来
我听见他也在连声地叫你



安慰

来看你的人都是善良的人
他们微笑着
轻声说着柔软的语言

他们一来你的咳嗽就少多了
陪他们说着话
偶尔还笑出声来

你们说得最多的是一些往事
这时候我就像一个局外人
看着你们想多年后的自己

想到自己也会老的
老的好多事情不能再来
老的咳嗽个不停

心情不好才开始咳嗽的
妈 您根本就没有病
是太多的话堵在了你的喉咙



风大了

比我来的时候大了
我回头
透过玻璃看到你
我知道你还在等人
刚才
你就是这么坐着等我



一墙之隔

他们还在开会
我在隔壁抽烟

他们讨论的问题还是昨天的问题
我抽得烟是我经常抽的烟

问题要一个个解决
烟要一根根的抽完
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nobody
进士出身


Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
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PostPosted: 2008-03-22 10:06:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

细腻,内在。
提读。
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杨海军
进士出身


Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
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PostPosted: 2008-03-22 14:33:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

让人感动的诗.
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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