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浣溪沙—无题

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-03-18 19:04:52 Post subject: 浣溪沙—无题

如梦词书意感伤，孤观玉蕊自飞扬，悠言疏影暗含芳。夜雨敲窗吟菊颂，晨风入户道兰章，啸歌雅韵未轻狂。

冰清
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Posted: 2008-03-19 11:47:04 Post subject:

上下片反衬鲜明. 比较起来, 我更喜欢下片: 夜雨敲窗吟菊颂晨风入户道兰章啸歌雅韵未轻狂是何等境界！

荆山云
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Posted: 2008-03-19 15:42:03 Post subject:

欣赏莹雪朋友好词。喜欢下篇。结出彩。

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-03-19 17:07:34 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

上下片反衬鲜明.
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谢谢您的细评！第一次试写“浣溪沙”。

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-03-19 17:09:13 Post subject:

荆山云 wrote:

欣赏莹雪朋友好词。喜欢下篇。结出彩。

谢谢荆山云点评，欢迎常来！

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