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对联学作三十四

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Posted: 2008-03-18 17:44:34 Post subject: 对联学作三十四

对联学作三十四【出句】雪凝冰冰化水水流成瀑【梅旎】【对句】情入梦梦萦心心系归鸿【郑达夫】【出句】山风入寺参禅意[一篓夕阳轻] 【对句】俚曲盈耳荡佛心[郑达夫] 【出句】半卷唐诗为杜撰[秋山] 【对句】一篇汉赋做铺张[郑达夫] 【出句】江心暗动轻浮月 [苑眉] 【对句】云缝偷窥璀璨星【郑达夫】【对句】雾漫雨帘青幛起【郑达夫】【出句】风掀云帐翠屏开 [苑眉] _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

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Posted: 2008-03-18 17:57:11 Post subject:

读着都不错。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-03-19 12:27:54 Post subject:

第一联用顶针手法,如行云流水,顺结自然,欣赏. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2008-03-24 16:21:28 Post subject:

谢谢两位先生! _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

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Posted: 2008-03-24 20:41:31 Post subject:

郑兄有空去诗选刊瞧瞧呀)

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Posted: 2008-03-26 18:28:07 Post subject: 问好

谢谢您光临,问好梅影三叠! _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

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