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桃花雨

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Posted: 2008-03-17 19:11:27 Post subject: 桃花雨

桃花一簇簇开满不在意蜂蝶恋，和我爱怜的目光染成粉红色的烟雨，梦境如歌搅拌绽放的三月。遐想。风斜雨细。湖面一圈圈荡开你散发的清香，轻轻敲碎时间的收藏散失已久的温润在桃红和柳绿的故园，聚拢越过遥远的期盼渐渐轻柔 03/17/2008 杭州

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Posted: 2008-03-17 19:19:46 Post subject:

给落尘吹点天堂的风

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Posted: 2008-03-17 22:52:57 Post subject:

翻过来时间的收藏被轻轻敲碎就没有原来的好是谁来敲的呢是清香妙清香敲时间的收藏构思巧妙

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Posted: 2008-03-17 23:08:04 Post subject:

树荫淘筛点点阳光，花瓣洒落小径停下脚步回首，仿佛见到你的身影 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-18 07:57:37 Post subject:

配上图，应该置顶的贴子。真美！悠子现在在哪啊。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-03-19 19:41:42 Post subject:

想着那个浪漫：走在风雨中...... _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-03-22 07:33:49 Post subject:

曲元奇 wrote:

翻过来时间的收藏被轻轻敲碎就没有原来的好是谁来敲的呢是清香妙清香敲时间的收藏构思巧妙

谢谢曲元奇问好曲元奇

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Posted: 2008-03-22 07:37:38 Post subject: 树荫淘筛小径, 花瓣洒落点点阳光,停下脚步, 仿佛见到你回首的身影

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

树荫淘筛点点阳光，花瓣洒落小径
停下脚步回首，仿佛见到你的身影

树荫淘筛小径, 花瓣洒落点点阳光
停下脚步, 仿佛见到你回首的身影

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Posted: 2008-03-22 12:22:42 Post subject:

花瓣点点洒落小径，阳光淘筛你回首的身影仿佛树荫停下脚步，淘筛花瓣洒落小径 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-22 17:15:48 Post subject:

花瓣洒落，回首小径，点点脚步树荫淘筛你停下的身影，阳光仿佛

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Posted: 2008-03-22 18:28:14 Post subject:

阳光仿佛似花瓣洒落树荫点点淘筛你的脚步见到小径身影回首，停下 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-22 21:59:07 Post subject:

哼~~~！吃吧~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-03-23 08:59:35 Post subject:

脚步回首淘筛停下的树荫花瓣阳光小径点点洒落你仿佛的身影

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Posted: 2008-03-24 08:12:53 Post subject:

树荫淘筛阳光，洒落在你的身影。花瓣脚步点点回首，仿佛小径停的下阳光、花瓣、身影。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-24 09:01:20 Post subject: 语无伦次

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

树荫淘筛阳光，洒落在你的身影。花瓣脚步点点回首，仿佛小径停的下阳光、花瓣、身影。

语无伦次

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Posted: 2008-03-24 16:24:27 Post subject: 哈！次轮无语～

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诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

树荫淘筛阳光，洒落在你的身影。花瓣脚步点点回首，仿佛小径停的下阳光、花瓣、身影。

语无伦次

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可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-04-01 21:57:48 Post subject:

哈哈~~~~什么都不说了, 顶吧~~~

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