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【原创】长相思.十四阕【古韵】
林丫头
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PostPosted: 2008-03-17 20:03:51    Post subject: 【原创】长相思.十四阕【古韵】 Reply with quote

第一阕 长相思.空思

墨云重,几千重。红字清笺侬指中,砚干藏阕封。
最难逢,却相逢。未解前缘爱已浓,蹙尖相思同。

第二阕 长相思.迁思


字数行,掸孤芳。说与华年傍枕囊,清光叹玉梁。
影成双,燕飞忙。凤阙深深玉指凉,怎知心路长。

第三阕 长相思.尘思

霭微垂,没紫衣。傍野湖边鸿雁啼。云床梦觉饥。
瘦因谁,对残晖。微弄沈沈灯厌迟。怅望无限思。

第四阕 长相思.花思


试手初,淡墨扶。愁绝南窗清影疏,绡痕哀未除。
爱何如,梦期苏。芳草榴花碎锦铺,夜来消瘦无。

第五阕 长相思.梦思

渺难裁,入菩怀。皓彩湘灵红玉埋,梦中是黛钗。
到蓬莱,翼悠哉。偷取飞琼錾小台,雪花头上开。

第六阕 长相思.琴思

婉歌颦,幻湘神。谁弄丝弦添泪痕,倚窗月伴芸。
晚风频,淼绝伦。一朵琼花报小春,不教花笑人。


第七阕 长相思.哀思

五尺栏,对无眠。管咽琵琶月下弹,杨花和泪残。
在人间,又经年。清赏篱西红乱旋,晚风依旧寒。

第八阕 长相思.蓦思

怕魂消,又魂消。扑面匀匀心欲撩,睑中柔似娇。
怨清宵,盼清宵。镜里红颜安在凋,玉儿琼佩摇。

第九阕 长相思.神思

毓在哪,问青婆。几许离伤春奈何,转头碎步挪。
小池荷,小池荷。谁卷清风长似娑,拨花看素娥。

第十阕 长相思 .婉思

情费奢,何故嗟。禅静游思至境涯,送花仙子家。
泣梨花,泣梨花。收尽关山和梦遮,藉风吹鬓鸦。

第十一阕 长相思 .雅思

剩寒轻,蔼蒸湘。谁与青山眉黛更,一轮彻骨清。
梦中惊,落花情。对面黏黏长短声,暗香双影明。

第十二阕 长相思 .焦思

莫上楼,怕上楼。无虑尤携一抹愁,泣还姣美幽。
蓼花羞,恰佯羞。一段悠悠寄赤眸,噙情似水柔。

第十三阕 长相思 .柔思

怯清吟,怯清吟。曲里常赊还暗寻,一张醉竹心。
到如今,到如今。不管弓弧哼断音,曲风飘碎襟。

第十四阕 长相思.思定

韵笔尖,卷青衫。扑扑香熏常似喃,沈香菊半含。
住江南,爱江南。弱柳随风远客帆,凤钗出珺奁。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-17 21:57:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜“梦思“的飘逸。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2008-03-18 08:04:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

借景抒情怀,悠悠长相思。幌然见到黛玉之影。
洋洋大观十四阕,足见感情之丰富,遣词用句之丰。
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是有缘
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PostPosted: 2008-03-18 16:09:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢一、二、五、八。

总体而言,细腻、自然、词句合心境。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-18 17:17:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

丫头好词!
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2008-03-19 12:06:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

思丝萦怀,细腻,情柔!
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