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应邀上市~哈
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PostPosted: 2008-03-14 07:33:36    Post subject: 应邀上市~哈 Reply with quote

《面线串起的温柔》

你是一锅沸腾的水
煮我如面线串起的温柔
怯情连连,细语不休

我是如此无能为力
在你遥远的期盼里
不,你没说,你总不说
任由时间会化解迷离

窗外依旧是不散的灰色蒙蒙
在这早春的三月里
我多想卸下如重的沉负
让你轻牵一下我冰凉的指

风熄了
唯念你的心思
悄然走在这满目的喧嚣里
感觉渐渐好一些吧
好一些

无缘由的病菌
今晨,突然在身体里撕磨


03/14/2008



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PostPosted: 2008-03-14 07:40:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

哇!俺很悲惨的喜欢这首。。。。读不下去了。收藏了。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-14 07:44:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢喜欢, 有点儿爽了~ Razz
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PostPosted: 2008-03-14 07:44:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

再读一遍,喜欢这深深浅浅的伤感滋味。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-14 08:46:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

检验报告出炉:H5N3
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PostPosted: 2008-03-14 23:03:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

这碗面汤一定很浓很厚~
好喜欢的。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-15 05:03:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

恩,太厚太浓,差点要了偶滴小命~~~嘻~
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