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五律春日忆旧

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-03-10 13:29:18 Post subject: 五律春日忆旧

雪尽千山绿湖平百草青清风游客醉煦日绽花馨送友闻金笛行舟荡翠萍家家春事近热议乐耕亭 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2008-03-10 15:07:46 Post subject:

学习。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-03-12 04:14:47 Post subject:

太客气了,请批评指正. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2008-03-12 04:37:46 Post subject:

雪尽千山绿湖平百草青喜欢！！欣赏！！ _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-03-12 10:25:46 Post subject:

谢谢达夫雅赏. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2008-03-12 15:13:37 Post subject:

春日是寫了，但憶舊好像并沒怎麽說。 _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

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Posted: 2008-03-13 06:58:24 Post subject:

送友闻金笛行舟荡翠萍家家春事近热议乐耕亭

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Posted: 2008-03-13 11:25:44 Post subject:

谢戴珏冰清评阅，送友和议耕皆忆旧之事。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2008-03-16 12:39:30 Post subject: 春日忆旧

黄洋界 wrote:

雪尽千山绿湖平百草青
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次韵奉和黄洋界《春日忆旧》

熙阳花吐蕊，润雨草回青。
冷月时幽梦，平湖仍静馨。
遥天吹玉笛，怒海荡心萍。
世变惊长别，春思赋柳亭。

附黄洋界《春日忆旧》

雪尽千山绿，湖平百草青。
清风游客醉，煦日绽花馨。
送友闻金笛，行舟荡翠萍。
家家春事近，热议乐耕亭。

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Posted: 2008-03-17 04:56:09 Post subject: 谢谢闻山

谢谢闻山兄赐和，学习了。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2008-03-18 17:26:09 Post subject:

黄老师妙笔似春风！

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Posted: 2008-03-19 12:18:48 Post subject:

谢谢庆宏赏评,春日好! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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