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投北美枫第四期《一杯葡萄酒的血》

倾听书卷
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Posted: 2007-03-21 16:45:08 Post subject: 投北美枫第四期《一杯葡萄酒的血》

·一杯葡萄酒的血（2首）浦君芝关于水伤水伤是一种特异的表现水伤往往和柔软有关系而有的水伤却异常锋利锋利到夺掉人的灵魂甚至生命。譬如悲哀譬如最近有个朋友的水伤是在一次长发飘过之后如闪电一击；如危崖上的水瀑溅湿所有生命的缝隙于是，他的肉体被湿淋淋地捞起而灵魂，却永远地干涸一杯葡萄酒的血一杯葡萄酒的媚眼娇俏珑玲；比端酒的那只玉手更具有透骨的杀伤力没有含情脉脉。夜晚的空气诱我在房间里飞成一只小小的蛾子把余下的日子沉沦沉沦进一只美丽的玻璃杯这是农历春节饭桌上的时间那些可以麻痹神经的事物虽然喜色却能让人生千疮百孔而葡萄酒，正沿着那只玉手的指尖滴下一丝殷红的血 _________________ 联系地址: 215500 江苏省常熟市地方志办公室浦君芝

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Posted: 2007-03-21 16:47:02 Post subject:

另外，还没有收到刊物。希望能够给我寄上。 _________________ 联系地址: 215500 江苏省常熟市地方志办公室浦君芝

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Posted: 2007-03-21 17:14:31 Post subject:

水伤是一种特异的表现水伤往往和柔软有关系.....意想新颖.多来交流. 杂志为半年期刊,还没有出来,当然你没有看到啊 .握手.

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Posted: 2007-03-21 20:15:12 Post subject:

感谢赵兄提醒,握手,请多批评 _________________ 联系地址: 215500 江苏省常熟市地方志办公室浦君芝

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Posted: 2007-03-21 20:36:19 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

水伤是一种特异的表现
水伤往往和柔软有关系.....意想新颖.多来交流.
杂志为半年期刊,还没有出来,当然你没有看到啊 .握手.

赵兄的诗，是我学习的。希望多交流批评
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Posted: 2007-04-11 23:44:35 Post subject:

倾听书卷 wrote:

赵福治 wrote:

水伤是一种特异的表现
水伤往往和柔软有关系.....意想新颖.多来交流.
杂志为半年期刊,还没有出来,当然你没有看到啊 .握手.

赵兄的诗，是我学习的。希望多交流批评

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Posted: 2007-04-12 03:30:12 Post subject:

水伤？是水的忧伤还是水的伤害呢？两首都喜欢！只是怀疑那只玉手到底是否有透骨的杀伤力。呵呵，祝诗人愉快！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2008-03-12 16:45:47 Post subject:

祝朋友愉快 _________________ 联系地址: 215500 江苏省常熟市地方志办公室浦君芝

莞君
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Posted: 2008-03-12 17:15:04 Post subject:

欣赏了问好不错的两个 _________________ 莞君

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Posted: 2008-03-13 01:14:27 Post subject:

而葡萄酒，正沿着那只玉手的指尖滴下一丝殷红的血问好~

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