是有缘
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Posts: 741
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 Posted: 2008-03-10 15:14:40 Post subject: [浣溪沙] 一江春水 |
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树动繁枝送暖风，
湖边柳绿映桃红。
闲闻百鸟唱林中。
美妙时光图好梦，
平常日月过斜空。
一江春水共情浓。 |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2008-03-10 15:28:13 Post subject: |
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| 意美景幽。 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2008-03-11 08:46:56 Post subject: |
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“一江春水共情浓”，情景交融，好句。
“美妙“与“好梦”相应，“平常”与“斜空”相应，“斜“字换”闲“字，似更好点。
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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| Posted: 2008-03-11 11:47:09 Post subject: |
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| 动静皆怡！ |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-03-24 08:02:06 Post subject: |
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谢谢莹雪。 |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-03-24 08:04:39 Post subject: |
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“一江春水共情浓”，情景交融，好句。
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多谢黄老师点评。问候。 |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-03-24 08:06:09 Post subject: |
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谢冰清老师美言鼓励。 |
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